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patriciajj commented on: Untethered Night by patriciajj 3 weeks 5 days ago
Your validation means the: Your validation means the world to me. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and appreciate my work.   
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patriciajj commented on: Its never worse by SSmoothie 3 weeks 5 days ago
With tumultuous realism and: With tumultuous realism and wrenching metaphors, you revealed the path to victory over deception. Often The Lie is so convincing that it contorts our inner being into a state of disorienting agony, as you expressed with fierce and exquisite artistry in this powerhouse of spiritual discovery.    But there’s more. The poem takes a sharp and inspiring turn with: “It knows, it knows” (The perfect words shatter the fragile illusion of indelible darkness) and from there your gifted pen pulls back the curtain.    In the midst of the cyclone “nothing happened”.   A stunning pilgrimage of renewal through acceptance, courage and truth. You are a treasure.    
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redbrick commented on: CTRL + ALT + DLT by redbrick 3 weeks 5 days ago
YES! all too easy.. and then: YES! all too easy.. and then Regret, the ever faithful, graces the scene with more interior struggle... Good old Shaekespeare, thanks for bringing him along...
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redbrick commented on: the falling by karlmcallister 3 weeks 5 days ago
The paradoxes of life and the: The paradoxes of life and the litany of ironies that it entails!
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redbrick commented on: time’s no friend by redbrick 3 weeks 5 days ago
Must go and find that, it: Must go and find that, it sounds vaguely familiar... 'Marvell' should be a memorable name.
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Teytonon commented on: Yes, today by Teytonon 3 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you for..: Thank you for your kind words. It would be good if I could go with her Flo, but I need to check with her first as I can only do that once a month. Take care.  
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redbrick commented on: + 1ST POEMS: Early On A Sunday Morning, 1, With Revelation 22:16, And John 11:26 And 12:32 by S74rw4rd123d 3 weeks 5 days ago
Symbolist and metaphorical in: Symbolist and metaphorical in the same breath, the employment of denotation and annotation in the expression of faith via astronomy concepts adds depth and dimension, texture and enrichment of meaning and reach.
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C03ru135c3n7 commented on: + 1ST POEMS: Early On A Sunday Morning, 2, On Psalms 19:12-13 And 23:2-3, Habakkuk 3:18, And John 20:28 by S74rw4rd123d 3 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you!  I really: Thank you!  I really appreciate the validation of your spiritual insight.
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redbrick commented on: + 1ST POEMS: Early On A Sunday Morning, 2, On Psalms 19:12-13 And 23:2-3, Habakkuk 3:18, And John 20:28 by S74rw4rd123d 3 weeks 5 days ago
Amen! That is a prayer and: Amen! That is a prayer and declaration of faith straight from one's centre
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redbrick commented on: afterparty by redbrick 3 weeks 5 days ago
That's quite what it's like: That's quite what it's like after a hurricabe
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karlmcallister commented on: time’s no friend by redbrick 3 weeks 5 days ago
Touché!   but always at my: Touché!   but always at my back I hear Time's winged chariot drawing near... (From "To his coy mistress" by Andrew Marvell)
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karlmcallister commented on: tHe CoInCiDeNcE oF oPpOsItEs by karlmcallister 3 weeks 5 days ago
Thanks!: Hi redbrick! Thanks for the reply and for your time. I've read some of your stuff and replied to some too. You are indeed a weaver of words!   sTaY rEaL,   Karl
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redbrick commented on: The Triangle by karlmcallister 3 weeks 6 days ago
Vertigo is no friend of hours: Vertigo is no friend of hours (sic) but time will tell.
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redbrick commented on: time’s no friend by redbrick 3 weeks 6 days ago
Indeed! And oftentimes a: Indeed! And oftentimes a useful alliance forged at others a dilemma of deadline or expiry proportions
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