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Pungus commented on: Deathbed by ray_strickland 1 day 4 hours* ago* "Yum" then we go to see what: "Yum" then we go to see what it really means to dream [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: welcome to the menagerie: by ewbonitz 1 day 4 hours* ago* Bravo seriously a grand and: Bravo seriously a grand and grand-again work of many detailed feels [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: Can you taste the commotion? by Pungus 1 day 5 hours* ago* Reminds me of a past hobo: Reminds me of a past hobo friend of mine who did the robot in mockery of those townspeople passing by. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: Can you taste the commotion? by Pungus 1 day 5 hours* ago* Yeah, now I'm just tryna: Yeah, now I'm just tryna catch a break from the scene, before being shoved right back in those bloodsuckers! :) [ go to comment ]
ramonathompsont commented on: DINNER by chris 1 day 10 hours* ago* brings back fond memories.: brings back fond memories. good write [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Tanka from a moldy scroll by Pungus 1 day 19 hours* ago* I want to applaud twice: : I want to applaud twice: first, for your respect for the traditional Tanka lineation and syllabification; and, then, for the gothis/science fiction effect that this poem presents. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Tanka from a moldy scroll by Pungus 1 day 19 hours* ago* That moldy scroll got a: That moldy scroll got a vibrant attitude! Sweet read there. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: true nature of poetry by Spinoza 1 day 19 hours* ago* Loved, love this - to be able: Loved, love this - to be able to walk away with dignity intact or even boltsered and recharged. And to be able to be doctoring, fathering, priesting as well as to doctor, father, and priest one to each other. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: keep your boots by Spinoza 1 day 19 hours* ago* Strong contrasts against the: Strong contrasts against the 'thorns in the road,' best be on our toes (with our boots on!). [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: lamenting scent of love by Spinoza 1 day 23 hours* ago* Boundless as desert dunes: A coyote scavenges for survival during a distanced romance; though what so becomes of his moon-quest? Do we discover through sifts, with burly paws of primordial passion, that eternally indivisible prism. Oh the starlight shimmers via phantom fingers who script precision for all us on such a hunt, boundless as desert dunes. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Alone Inside by Wordman 2 days 31 min* ago* It was a brilliant strategy: It was a brilliant strategy to describe loneliness as a detachment from one's very self, creating a sense of utter emptiness. I could feel the crushing desolation in that space "where I once was" where "steps wander me through dreams". An impressive expression that hits the target and pierces the heart. Stunning! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Patience by Wordman 2 days 38 min* ago* Some striking wordplay blazes: Some striking wordplay blazes throughout this metaphorical perspective on hope and patience. There's an enthralling and radiant unfolding as "shards of darkness" dissipate into "sunlight’s dance"; then the cycle begins again on a note of blissful renewal. And such an outstanding finale you created in that last line! Loving every moment of this. [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 2 days 50 min* ago* ;-): Rock on Crypticbard! You get me! [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 2 days 52 min* ago* ;-): My love for transcends all! RIP Lady A [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 2 days 54 min* ago* ;-): Love you Dear! [ go to comment ]