With tumultuous realism and: With tumultuous realism and wrenching metaphors, you revealed the path to victory over deception. Often The Lie is so convincing that it contorts our inner being into a state of disorienting agony, as you expressed with fierce and exquisite artistry in this powerhouse of spiritual discovery.
But there’s more. The poem takes a sharp and inspiring turn with: “It knows, it knows” (The perfect words shatter the fragile illusion of indelible darkness) and from there your gifted pen pulls back the curtain.
In the midst of the cyclone “nothing happened”.
A stunning pilgrimage of renewal through acceptance, courage and truth. You are a treasure.
YES! all too easy.. and then: YES! all too easy.. and then Regret, the ever faithful, graces the scene with more interior struggle... Good old Shaekespeare, thanks for bringing him along...
Thank you for..: Thank you for your kind words. It would be good if I could go with her Flo, but I need to check with her first as I can only do that once a month. Take care.
Symbolist and metaphorical in: Symbolist and metaphorical in the same breath, the employment of denotation and annotation in the expression of faith via astronomy concepts adds depth and dimension, texture and enrichment of meaning and reach.
Thanks!: Hi redbrick! Thanks for the reply and for your time. I've read some of your stuff and replied to some too. You are indeed a weaver of words!
sTaY rEaL,
Karl