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redbrick commented on: Isla de Lagrimas by Ben_ 8 weeks 3 days ago
A truly poignant leaving: A truly poignant leaving behind.  Some things in life we are compelled to do, the other alternative is less than favourable. Most deeply felt.
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Stephen commented on: RESENTMENT by Stephen 8 weeks 5 days ago
Vietnam: Poems which are numbered 1-40 at this time are my reccolections of the "aura" of the country during the Vietnam war era.
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Pungus commented on: RESENTMENT by Stephen 8 weeks 5 days ago
I am enjoying the developing: I am enjoying the developing theme of a "Soldier's Diary" type narrative you got going on... It bridges the portals between worlds with a bleak, broad philosophical framework. Bravo!
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Stephen commented on: SOMEWHERE by Stephen 9 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you for your observation. : It was about me as a kid in the Vietnamese war.
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hollow.point commented on: SOMEWHERE by Stephen 9 weeks 5 days ago
Vague and anonymous across the sea: Delightful iris beats the tandem fedeuciary of state benefits
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redbrick commented on: Terror by Pungus 9 weeks 6 days ago
Looked it up, you are: Looked it up, you are correct; Ecclesiastes 1:18: “For in much wisdom is much grief: and he that increaseth knowledge increaseth sorrow.”  Get what you are saying!
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redbrick commented on: Tanka Thought by Pungus 9 weeks 6 days ago
Most welcome, P: Most welcome, P
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Pungus commented on: Tanka Thought by Pungus 9 weeks 6 days ago
Ah, why thank you, my kind: Ah, why thank you, my kind sir!!
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Bazoora commented on: The Same Moon by Bazoora 10 weeks 2 days ago
Thank you. I live with her: Thank you. I live with her now. :D
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redbrick commented on: Tanka Thought by Pungus 10 weeks 2 days ago
Totally relatable and crisply: Totally relatable and crisply resonant 
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redbrick commented on: permission by redbrick 10 weeks 2 days ago
I like that you went cosmic: I like that you went cosmic with it! There’s something in the poem’s motion that invites that kind of constellation‑mapping. For me, though, the piece was working more in the realm of tempo rather than trajectory. But I appreciate the Sagittarius drift which is interesting to see how the poem’s internal movement reads from the outside. Much enjoyed engagement 
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Pungus commented on: permission by redbrick 10 weeks 2 days ago
Sagittarius: An astrological acknowledgement, on the nuances of how to love properly... I pictured a sort of "connecting of cosmic dots," as it were, or perhaps a pulling of constellations... What's the one with the bow and arrow? Another extension of Orion? Bleh.
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Stephen commented on: TWO DOORS by Stephen 10 weeks 2 days ago
Thank You: This was a delusion i suffered in the hospital while doped up on morphine. Or was it a delusion?
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ramonathompsont commented on: TWO DOORS by Stephen 10 weeks 3 days ago
short but powerful. could: short but powerful. could almost see the Grim Reaper stalking forward
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Pungus commented on: Tanka Time by Pungus 10 weeks 3 days ago
That's a nice way of looking: That's a nice way of looking at it; a tiddybit dorky though *wink* or needlessly assuming
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