I should always enjoy being kind to you
no matter the outcome
donning a warrior's code
alignment raises our sum
Yet to offer a whole heart
is now irresponsible to myself
so I'm just gonna jettison off this busted shelf
lie down here, bleed a while
coagulate myself,
and regain
retain a fettered health
I know your truth isn't solely a matter of yesses and noes
sometimes it's standing firm in the wake of a my cantankerous
albeit aware
yearned, lured libido
donning no cape, no ultimate bond, no assorted ribbons, or big red bows
you clumsily land so many bruisable body blows
for such a definitive set of personal reasons
rejecting me
along your foundation of crumbled, busted concrete
Yet you, and that home, were never mine to claim
I suppose I can never lose what hasn't been offered to me anyway
and the reality of my choices remains the same..
so no matter which gospel you preach
and no matter the retracted
albeit very jagged
rows of sunken teeth
for her, my hope is mince meat
making a steady man's heart go weak
for no valued reasons
fading 'we' to foreign memories
Almost there... such great
Almost there... such great imagery and metaphor the structure begs for eleoqunce but, it gets caught on emotionalism and luckily it wins out. Something reL special here .
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
You're too kind smoothie,
You're too kind smoothie, thank you!
Think it still might need a bit more refining but I'm very happy with these bones, thanks for checking in!