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2025 I will always enjoy being kind to you
no matter the outcome
donning a warrior's code
alignment raises our sum
Yet to offer a whole heart
is now irresponsible to myself
so I'm just gonna jettison off this busted shelf
lie down here, bleed a while
coagulate myself,
and regain
retain a fettered health
because showing love isn't always a matter of rejection or acceptance
It's honesty.
and your loving heart must inextricably bestow
that sometimes rejection bears the passive
albeit very jagged
teeth
of the courage to say no
rather than oui,
even if my heart goes weak
and its pulse slows
Almost there... such great
Almost there... such great imagery and metaphor the structure begs for eleoqunce but, it gets caught on emotionalism and luckily it wins out. Something reL special here .
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
You're too kind smoothie,
You're too kind smoothie, thank you!
Think it still might need a bit more refining but I'm very happy with these bones, thanks for checking in!