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An Active Volcano And Homesteads

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reedited:  06.10.2023 noticed, while rereading and rechecking/reviewing my own experimental works, an ungrammatical and misworded verse/line:

 

1.  "each could not
have walk passed each other"


and changed it to:


"*they could not
have walk*ed pas*t each other"


and..


2.  "the past (Alas, now it's over)"


to..

"the past (Alas, now it's over*!)"