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Sakura Serenade in Spring

Sakura Serenade in Spring



Cherry petals drift—

Millie's ears perk. Stop.

Her nose twitches, pleased.

We wander winding paths, her paws

Padding soft. Silence.



Blossoms burst!

Pink and white clouds aloft.



Okawa's waters whisper,

Wind. Castle walls

Climb and shine. Millie's eyes,

Bright and wise, they scan—

Halt.

Her tail wags time to Spring's

New theme.



Sakura scents swirl,

Sweet and—

Strong. Millie sniffs, savoring

Each note of the

Song. We climb stone steps,

Worn smooth by—



Time it stops.

Her loyal presence,

A comfort sublime.



At the summit,

Breathless. Awed.

Beauty blooming,

History thawed.

Millie sits, sentinel—



Pause.



Cherry-tinged winds

Around us glide.



Down by the river,

Petals float. Like tiny

Pink-hued fairy—

Boats! Millie splashes,

Playful and free.

Her joy infectious,



Pure glee.



In this foreign land,

Familiar love.

My canine companion,

Gift from—

Above. Together we witness

Spring's grand display,

In Osaka's embrace,

This perfect—



Day.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is essentially the same poem as my previous entry, “Sentinel of Spring”. However, in this version of the poem, I am trying something new: I am using abrupt changes in rhythm and metre to emulate the dissonance in Stravinsky’s famous Le Sacre du Printemps. I hope that comes across with more initial acceptance than he received. Wink


If you have been paying attention, you will know how obsessed I am with that piece!

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Sentinel of Spring.

Sentinel of Spring.



Cherry petals drift on Osaka's breeze,
Millie's ears perk, her nose twitches, pleased.
We wander winding paths, her paws padding soft,
As blossoms burst in clouds of pink and white aloft.

 


Okawa's waters whisper and wind,
Reflecting castle walls that climb and shine.
Millie's eyes, bright and wise, scan the scene,
Her tail wags time to Spring's new theme.

 


Sakura scents swirl, sweet and strong,
Millie sniffs, savoring each note of the song.
We climb stone steps, worn smooth by time,
Her loyal presence, a comfort sublime.

 


At the summit, we pause, breathless, awed,
By beauty blooming, history thawed.
Millie sits, sentinel at my side,
As cherry-tinged winds around us glide.

 


Down by the river, petals float,
Like tiny pink-hued fairy boats.
Millie splashes, playful and free,
Her joy infectious, pure glee.

 


In this foreign land, familiar love,
My canine companion, gift from above.
Together we witness Spring's grand display,
In Osaka's embrace, this perfect day.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a continuation of the series. Apparently, I have decided to write them based on different seasons and styles. For this one, I guess I have used a more "traditional" rhyming style closer to my normal fashion.

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reedited:  06.10.2023 noticed, while rereading and rechecking/reviewing my own experimental works, an ungrammatical and misworded verse/line:

 

1.  "each could not
have walk passed each other"


and changed it to:


"*they could not
have walk*ed pas*t each other"


and..


2.  "the past (Alas, now it's over)"


to..

"the past (Alas, now it's over*!)"

 

Dual

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Isamu Kensei

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

Isamu Kensei means "Swordsman of Courage." This is my first attempt at writing a poem in Japanese. It probably does not read very well. If you happen to speak any Japanese, could you let me know how well I did?

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