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Reedited:  06.10.2023 noticed, while rereading and rechecking/reviewing my own experimental works, an ungrammatical and misworded verse/line:

1.  "each could not
have walk passed each other"

and changed it to:

"*they could not
have walk*ed pas*t each other"

and..

2.  "the past (Alas, now it's over)"

to..

"the past (Alas, now it's over*!)"

Isamu Kensei means "Swordsman of Courage." This is my first attempt at writing a poem in Japanese. It probably does not read very well. If you happen to speak any Japanese, could you let me know how well I did?