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"Never give up" ...

I wrote this poem after listening "There is a Light (that never goes out)" by The Smiths.

Fort Jesus is in Mombasa, Kenya. It was built by the Portuguese in the seventeenth century.

Had words in my head, had to just put them in writting and hoped they make sence. Eventually this poem will be revised.

Would like some insight.
been trying to make this read better i know i use Looking out the window what do I see?, to much in this poem but its to show its a different day/or time, how else can i word it so it reflects another day/ week.
Any ideas from you great writes

there ya go!

This one was written about Tom ___. With him it's never enough, and never will be.