Never Enough

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On the times I get to hold you
When we get to touch
Are able to kiss
It is never enough

To hear your laugh
And how quiet you talk
Of being that close to you
It is never enough

When we do spend time together
The minutes seem like hours
When in fact it’s the opposite but
It is never enough

Now that we are trying
To talk dad into letting us
Be together, we both find that
It is never enough

You brought up the idea
Of us getting married one day
And having babies but then again
It is never enough

It never will be
Because when we get what we want
We sit and think of the next thing because
It is never enough

~Chrystal
Written on
September 26, 2011

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This one was written about Tom ___. With him it's never enough, and never will be.

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GeneConner2008's picture

hey

This poem is great. It is poem about love and I can feel the love

crimsonangel24's picture

Awww... Thank you. I dont

Awww... Thank you. I dont know what I meant when I started writing it, but yea, it's a poem about love. I am glad that you can feel it. :-D


Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before. - Steven Wright

People like you are the reason people like me exsist. Out of a song of the same title by a band called 'Say Anything'

Vixen's picture

When two people find real

When two people find real love,, time and ideas seem endless... Yes, you can't have enough of each other and everything... Hmmm... I don't know why I shared that,-- but this poem exactly describes how it is with love ...

There is not enough words to express love or enough time to love...

Beautiful!


Shye

“ Let the beauty of what you love be what you do."
                                                   ~ Rumi

crimsonangel24's picture

Thank You

That is why I wrote this poem. I always state what I am feelin that particular moment. I felt at the time (heck I always feel this) that I just want to make two become one.

And you shared that because it is what u feel. And I thank you for your comment.

But I feel I must say, that over eleven years, I have tried to write about love and what it does to you. Yet, I have always fallen short. I think that is just because no one, not even Shakespear or Dorothy Parker or take your pick of famous poets, can come close to writing what it is to be in love.


Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before. - Steven Wright

People like you are the reason people like me exsist. Out of a song of the same title by a band called 'Say Anything'

Vixen's picture

You're welcome!

Right! Not enough amount of words and description can actually write about the 4-letter word love :) That's why I like this poem :)

It's just...Never enough...


Shye

“ Let the beauty of what you love be what you do."
                                                   ~ Rumi

crimsonangel24's picture

Honestly,

even that wasn't as big of a description I could give. But, I felt it was just enough. I have many, many poems about love, but I think this one just trumped them all.


Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before. - Steven Wright

People like you are the reason people like me exsist. Out of a song of the same title by a band called 'Say Anything'