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Starward commented on: You might read this. by Madmartigan 1 year 34 weeks ago
This poem resembles a: This poem resembles a conversation, or parts of a conversation, overheard across a distance---like a busy restaurant floor, a cashier lane in a department store, or the subway's middle car at rush hour.  But, whatever it may represent, I like it very much, and was very impressed as I read it.
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crypticbard commented on: chiseled out by redbrick 1 year 34 weeks ago
Oh yean, that is one way of: Oh yeah, that is one way of looking at it! One thing it is to be statuesque and quite another to be statue-fied  
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Pungus commented on: chiseled out by redbrick 1 year 34 weeks ago
Hey that's okay: Statues are bowed to
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Starward commented on: Coon Hunting in the Brambles by Spinoza 1 year 34 weeks ago
The conversational tone of: The conversational tone of yours words cleverly dangles, but does not disclose, a huge backstory behind the incidents you are describing.  I read this in between viewing segments of the film that I consider the greatest and most poetic ghost story every committed to celluloid---so I was well prepared and, yet paradoxically, not at all prepared for this very effective tale to work its process.
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Pungus commented on: a robot wrote this, it wasn't really me by Jesster 1 year 34 weeks ago
This whole thread is a ten: This whole thread is a ten taco feast
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Pungus commented on: I never asked for this. by humanfruit 1 year 34 weeks ago
'definitely' like dessert: 'definitely' like dessert
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Starward commented on: I never asked for this. by humanfruit 1 year 34 weeks ago
Sorry to hear your dreads: Sorry to hear your dreads were removed.  I think that is quite an impressive style (one not within my reach, definitely).  
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sweetwater commented on: Summer Waltz. by sweetwater 1 year 34 weeks ago
Thank you Stella x: Thank you Stella x
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sweetwater commented on: Something. by sweetwater 1 year 34 weeks ago
Thank you, and thank you too: Thank you, and thank you too for reading it. Ghosts as such seem to be attracted to my family. But that feeling was most unpleasant. I have walked there since but thankfully not felt it again. sue.
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Pungus commented on: Something. by sweetwater 1 year 34 weeks ago
The delicate balanced: The delicate balanced contrast of air soft and gentle gives the fear you feel such intensity.. a brilliant ghost poem!
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ramonathompsont commented on: Death Is Now Acceptable by ramonathompsont 1 year 34 weeks ago
thank you  : thank you  
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Teytonon commented on: Death Is Now Acceptable by ramonathompsont 1 year 34 weeks ago
Cherish all the little things: Cherish all the little things Hear the lark, hear how he sings Or the sound of children laughiing Or the sound of children laughing  Something's wrong, I just know it Even obvious to me, you show it Love is why I'm here today I'm listening, you'd like to say 'Fuck this life! I want to die!' Enlightenment. Give it a try
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ramonathompsont commented on: CONTROL MY DEMONS by georgeschaefer 1 year 34 weeks ago
we all have those demons we: we all have those demons we must battle. sad but true fact of life
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ewbonitz commented on: Thank U God! by ewbonitz 1 year 34 weeks ago
Thanks Bard,   I haven't been: Thanks Bard,   I haven't been sick like this since getting Covid a few years back. I'm glad to be feeling much better today and finally back to work, but I'm still a wee bit under the weather! Fortunately, this should be near it's end.
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crypticbard commented on: Thank U God! by ewbonitz 1 year 34 weeks ago
Get well brother, that's no: Get well brother, that's no ride in the park. Had something similar for years getting fevers in the afternoon, congestion and irritable throat tract, epipharyngitis it was. No fun. Prayers and thoughts of well being your way.
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