The concept of the spider pet: The concept of the spider pet dream-weaving is excellent! and lines weaving into themselves, each other and into the next allows for a type of stream of consciousness found in prose literature. So glad you picked out that aspect and feature. Cheers dear poet! Rik
Mermaid ain't got a clue: Such an elaborate tapestry of thought, the lines tied into themselves with silken intricacies! what spider pets might dream to weave!
The title serves as part of: The title serves as part of the poem without being intrinsically part of it, in this poem; much in the term of mental flow, hence that 'gang of giants' is a valid and quite an exciting gleaning!
Gang of giants?: The title is perfectly vague when the poem comes into view as does certain scenery can abruptly alter, especially dehydrated with storm approaching.
Really poetic features,: Really poetic features, taking out the instrumentals, then the musicality of the lyric comes to the front. And poetry is much like a dream, only recorded and closely watched and returned to!
Thanks Patriciajj. A visual: Thanks Patriciajj. A visual is quite effective as a communication bridge. So glad it worked here. And the undercurrent is a power beneath what is percepticble and that is enjoyable as well. Allow me to express my gratitude for your demonstrating these in your most welcome response.
I'm always greatly honored: I'm always greatly honored when you stop by. Thank you for taking the time to read, I mean, really read, with sharp insight, a luminous eye and deep perception. Your stunning feedback that cut straight to the heart of my message, and so sublimely, was the highlight of my day. Thank you!!!
I'm deeply touched by your: I'm deeply touched by your appreciation for my intent and vision in this long overdue tribute. Starward has been an example of excellence and generosity to us all. I can't thank you enough for your brilliant expression that has completely turned my day around. Blessings upon blessings.
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