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Starward commented on: (W)retched Poetry by metaphorist 1 year 32 weeks ago
Your verbal talent,: Your verbal talent, especially with metaphor, is endlessly fascinating.  Bravo!
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Starward commented on: Rotten by metaphorist 1 year 32 weeks ago
Let me say first that I: Let me say first that I disagree with your assertion in the final line, because someone rotten to the core could not produce the kind of poetry that you have.  That said, I will say again how much I admire the way you deploy and control your metaphors.
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Starward commented on: Mute by metaphorist 1 year 32 weeks ago
I dearly hope the final: I dearly hope the final quatrain is an expression and not an intention.  
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Starward commented on: Grayscale by metaphorist 1 year 32 weeks ago
I love the way you deploy: I love the way you deploy your metaphors.  Your screen name is so very, very appropriate; and your verbal artistry is so very, very skillful.
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Starward commented on: Small by metaphorist 1 year 32 weeks ago
I have fallen behind in: I have fallen behind in reading your wonderful poems as they appear, and I apologize for this unintentional neglect.  This reminds me of a science fiction story, from the thirties, that I first read in December, 1977 (when I was going through a situation very similar to what your poem describes) about a person (whether human or not I was never sure when reading the story) who began to shrink so small that atoms seemed like galaxies, and so on and so on.  This poem reminded me of that situation,
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: He's Unimportant by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 33 weeks ago
'Why should we care?' -: 'Why should we care?' - Indeed, the question.
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Spinoza commented on: Zombie by Seraphim 1 year 33 weeks ago
take a break from the media:   We all go into zombie mode from time to time. There’s a lot of darkness prowling the world nowadays. Sometimes we just need to withdraw for awhile, to find our way back, to rediscover our centre.
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Spinoza commented on: HAPPY EASTER by joy 1 year 33 weeks ago
enjoyed this:   A moment of peace in the morning breeze with twinkling stars above the trees.   I enjoyed this.
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Starward commented on: HAPPY EASTER by joy 1 year 33 weeks ago
I applaud this poem.  Back in: I applaud this poem.  Back in July of 1974, on a Friday night (I was not, then, smart enough to make note of the date), I had a similar experience.  I have never forgotten that event and what transpired after that.
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Starward commented on: Bubbled up by humanfruit 1 year 33 weeks ago
I certainly agree with: I certainly agree with Stephen on that great line.
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Teytonon commented on: Owner of my Prison by Tortured_Poet 1 year 33 weeks ago
Who are you?: O P.O. U P.O.? U R P.O.? URE P.O.? URE POE? U RED POE? URE D POET? R U RED, POET? RT! URE D POET! O RT! URE D POET! TORTURED_POET
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patriciajj commented on: Its a Good Friday by SSmoothie 1 year 33 weeks ago
With wit, sincere devotion: With wit, sincere devotion and graceful charm, you lifted my spirits with these inspiring words. Your kind wishes and the reminder that miracles still happen dispelled so many shadows and was the perfect gift ahead of Easter Sunday. Rejoicing in this radiant expression.  
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Wordman commented on: Blinded by Wordman 1 year 33 weeks ago
Thankssss SS, glad you: Thankssss SS, glad you enjoyed this. 
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georgeschaefer commented on: CONTROL MY DEMONS by georgeschaefer 1 year 33 weeks ago
wow, that's a lot to digest. : wow, that's a lot to digest.  Thanks for reading and commenting
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jade commented on: I WILL WAIT by joy 1 year 33 weeks ago
❤️ talented..: ❤️ talented..
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