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Pungus commented on: The Poet That Never Sleeps by lyrycsyntyme 3 years 15 weeks ago
Something special: It's easy to recognize how extremely elevated, eloquent, intelligent etc your writing style is. You are so clear and self-aware; it shows like gemstones in your dope diamond flow.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
Mary Kelly's proximity to the: Mary Kelly's proximity to the prostitution circles that The Ripper targeted were enough to make her a target, and perhaps - as you posit - accidental bait for the demise of the mysterious serial killer. In considering your theory, which I'd have to agree is very plausible, I've been considering what the motives of a female Ripper might be. Perhaps one betrayed and scorned lover of a man whom had been with prostitutes behind her back? Perhaps a woman from a home broken in such a manner? Though I'd anticipate that a woman with children would have a difficult time, in that day, leaving into the night to go on a murderous rampage. Unless, perhaps, herself the grown daughter of a family in which she watched such unfold between her parents? Or perhaps religious or cultural zealotry gone too far? Well, it goes without much saying that going on a killing spree would be going much too far in any of these scenarioes. Any specific thoughts, yourself, on a character profile of your Ripper?   I remember reading, and separately seeing in a documentary, once upon a time a theory that the Ripper was from a prominent family, and thus why he (or, as you make a strong case for, she) was never identified. Perhaps that's part of the truth - and if Mary Kelly did survive and escape - might have further afforded her being left to start a new life, as reporting her alive would have led to the obvious question: whose body was dismembered?
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: YOUR MOTHER’S ADVICE by georgeschaefer 3 years 15 weeks ago
haha. : haha. 
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Starward commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
Thank you.  : Thank you.  
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georgeschaefer commented on: YOUR MOTHER’S ADVICE by georgeschaefer 3 years 15 weeks ago
I did call Jill but I didn't: I did call Jill but I didn't really have a good time.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
Thank you for sharing further: Thank you for sharing further insight. I enjoyed reading it earlier, but in squeezing reading time between a very physically taxing day, haven't really mustered the energy for the type of response I'd like to give. Just getting done for the day (or perhaps I should say 'night') in the wee hours, but will revisit tomorrow. Thanks again, it's quite fascinating.   p/s No worries about the typo.
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Starward commented on: asteriskos by redbrick 3 years 15 weeks ago
Although brief, this poem: Although brief, this poem presents a very powerful imagery and an emotional effect that my poor words cannot adequately describe, except to say thank you for sharing its beauty with us.
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Starward commented on: Uneven breaths by SSmoothie 3 years 15 weeks ago
Thank you for the reply.  Let: Thank you for the reply.  Let me say thanks, again, for posting this magnificent poem.
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Starward commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: WallStones; In That Woods, A Mutant by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
Thank you.  I take that as: Thank you.  I take that as quite a compliment.  Before I became a poet, I had wanted to write science fiction stories, horror stories, and murder mysteries.  I guess some of that still lingers.  Thanks again for commenting, I really appreciate your words.
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Pungus commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: WallStones; In That Woods, A Mutant by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
Now this I can vibe with: So digging these scyfy hellscapes you're dishing out. Top notch stuff man.
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crypticbard commented on: asteriskos by redbrick 3 years 15 weeks ago
Many thanks Patricia. I am: Many thanks Patricia. I am glad of it and hoping for more poetic journeys down the road.
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crypticbard commented on: asteriskos by redbrick 3 years 15 weeks ago
Thanks most kindly. It really: Thanks most kindly. It really helps when we are aware of what the poems do. You are most appreciated.
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SSmoothie commented on: Uneven breaths by SSmoothie 3 years 15 weeks ago
Thank you so much for the: Thank you so much for the glorious effort you have taken to carefully consider this work and 2 into two has been duly noted and affirmed. I have changed it  best blessings ss 
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Starward commented on: I Can Not Wait � by heaven06 3 years 15 weeks ago
What a great testimony, and I: What a great testimony, and I think this poem speaks, or should speak, for every Christian's attitude.
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Starward commented on: The Risen Emmanuel by LornaRJ 3 years 15 weeks ago
This is a tremendous: This is a tremendous testimony poem.  May I ask a couple of questions?
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