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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; The Stars *+You, Lord+* Established [Psalm 8:3] by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
A bolt of elation runs: A bolt of elation runs through this incredibly uplifting song of praise. Living light. God bless you. 
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Starward commented on: The Biggest Challenges Facing Internet Marketing And How An Agency Can Help by twelve12 3 years 15 weeks ago
How, may I ask, can this be: How, may I ask, can this be considered a poem?
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Starward commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: WallStones; Anticipating The Event by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
Thank you so much; coming: Thank you so much; coming from you, quite a compliment!!!
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Pungus commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: WallStones; Anticipating The Event by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
Much like Lem: I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
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Starward commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
Thank you for the reply. : Thank you for the comment.  First let me apologize for the typo in her name, which I have just now corrected.  My theory would not support a book's length; it is presented in a short poem which was posted to this site; and its original posting was on the premiere Ripper website, Casebook Jack the Ripper, in London, in January 2001.  That was my first ever poem posted on the internet.      Mary Kelly is a fascinating person, even with what little we know of her.  We know she was considered very beautiful, was of small stature, but curvy.  She was not a streetwalker; she was what we would now term an "outcall" girl.  Though she lived in East London, several of her clients resided in the more affluent West end; some people believed that one of her clients was a member of the Prime Minister's cabinet.  She was fluent in French and Welsh, as well as English, and one of her landlords remembered a crate of books which accompanied her to the various residences she occupied during her brief adult life:  these books were fine editions of the nineteenth century novels that we now teach in our high school English courses.  Her "outcalls" were not always just for sex:  she was also invited to fine dining, and to West end theaters.  She was, apparently, very good company.  From time to time, she worked as a model for the painter, Walt Sickert; in the 1940's, when Sickert's son, Joe, was on his deathbed, he said that his father had fallen in love with Mary Kelly sometime before the Ripper attack; and that every female Sickert ever painted after 1888 was Mary Kelly.  I believe Sickert knew that she had killed the Ripper in self-defense, and helped her to escape the country---most likely to France, which was a country she had visited during a vacation in 1887, where she was fluent in the language.  I believe that there is yet an old trunk in some old house, up in the attic, covered with dust, which, when opened, will give to us a diary, or letters, or some indication of what happened to her after 1888.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 15 weeks ago
Not what I'd imagine looking into beside the Christmas tree!: Hugely fascinating, none the less. Did you ever consider putting your theory together into a book publication?
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: wilderness by tula 3 years 15 weeks ago
Pretty words, pretty flow.: Pretty words, pretty flow.
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Starward commented on: Succor by shewhodwellsint... 3 years 15 weeks ago
Thank you, and I am very: Thank you, and I am very grateful to you for posting this poem.  I have read and re-read it several times.  It is fascinating, and, though brief, it is profound as well.
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Starward commented on: The Empty Page by LornaRJ 3 years 15 weeks ago
This is an excellent: This is an excellent spiritual poem!
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Teytonon commented on: STILL AN OPTIMIST by joy 3 years 15 weeks ago
This is a wonderful poem.: This is a wonderful poem. The world needs more people like you. Thanks for posting!
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Peaceless by mittens4444 3 years 15 weeks ago
Touching poem: Wish not for the death of hearts that beat. When fingers that can feel cracks become extinct, thus hope is severed from humankind for good.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: YOUR MOTHER’S ADVICE by georgeschaefer 3 years 15 weeks ago
haha. Yea, if your mom didn't: haha. Yea, if your mom didn't succeed at getting you to do it, words on a wall are unlikely to do much. Those bathroom walls say a whole lot of things, anyway. I assume that most people don't "call jill for a good time at ...." 
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DSR.Summar commented on: Succor by shewhodwellsint... 3 years 16 weeks ago
Bless You Starward! : Much Gratitude for your kindness:)
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Starward commented on: Succor by shewhodwellsint... 3 years 16 weeks ago
There is a tone to this poem: There is a tone to this poem that gives it a sense of being an ancient inscription that has lasted through the ages; just as the beauty of this poem, going forward, will also last for ages.  If I were teaching a course on poetry, this poem would be on my syllabus:  I think every aspiring poet, and even a well experienced poet, can learn a lot from this poem.  Frankly, I think thiis is one of the best poems ever posted on postpoems.  It will be a poem I revisit.
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Starward commented on: Penn in play? Play Penn by Teytonon 3 years 16 weeks ago
I see the correction, and I: I see the correction, and I say again:  excellent poem!
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