The anguish of the speaker's emotions radiates with intense power off the lines of this poem. If this is an actual account of your experience, my heart goes out to you. I am, however, glad to see another poem from you. This poem is so intense that it hurts to read it; and that is true on a second or subsequent reading; which makes it a very successful and excellent poem.
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Truth in writing.Wit rocks. (No?)
~A~
The anguish of the speaker's
The anguish of the speaker's emotions radiates with intense power off the lines of this poem. If this is an actual account of your experience, my heart goes out to you. I am, however, glad to see another poem from you. This poem is so intense that it hurts to read it; and that is true on a second or subsequent reading; which makes it a very successful and excellent poem.
So let me say, here: great poem!
Starward