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redbrick commented on: a widow’s lament by redbrick 26 weeks 4 days ago
My one joy in this is to be: My one joy in this is to be able to share something worth reading and mulling over. Thanks so much
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ramonathompsont commented on: DAILY GRATITUDE by joy 26 weeks 4 days ago
lovely words: lovely words
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redbrick commented on: Rum is for Sailors by CerpinTaxt 26 weeks 4 days ago
This poem feels like someone: This poem feels like someone caught between sea and shore, spilling fragments of self while reaching for something beyond. The refrain “I do not exist” lands heavy, but the nautical imagery keeps it moving, almost like a song half‑sung.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: as absence turns by redbrick 26 weeks 5 days ago
I sure do agree with this!: I sure do agree with this!
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Pungus commented on: as absence turns by redbrick 26 weeks 5 days ago
Of any poet I have ever had: Of any poet I have ever had the pleasure of not merely reading but actually befriending (which is indeed an immaculate honor), the emotional weight you are able to carry from stanza to stanza never fails to amaze, leaving me, and any member in your audience I'm sure, gasping for their own breath again after the powerhouse presence you sprinkle the stage with... And on the subject of absence, I apologize for mine; I am well aware that a grumpy cat is never necessarily the greatest sign, lol
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Maybe God Breaks us by GeneConner2008 26 weeks 5 days ago
This is a good poem.  And the: This is a good poem.  And the theology is excellent.  Your theology seems to incline eastward not westward, and that, too, is a good thing!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: a widow’s lament by redbrick 26 weeks 6 days ago
I cannot stop re-reading this: I cannot stop re-reading this poem!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: a widow’s lament by redbrick 27 weeks 6 hours ago
I have written a few poems: I have written a few poems about the Romanovs' martyrdom, but none of my stuff rises to the level that this poem achieves.  You are Il Miglior Fabbro!!!  I feel very blessed and privileged to be able to say this to you openly.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by Starward-Led 27 weeks 6 hours ago
That is so very true!: That is so very true!
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redbrick commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by Starward-Led 27 weeks 7 hours ago
Indeed, it is a painful thing: Indeed, it is a painful thing to meditate on and process. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by Starward-Led 27 weeks 7 hours ago
That line, "But I cannot: That line, "But I cannot forget the other ground, where no flowers bloom, no bells resound. The Romanov children, stripped and slain, their bodies hidden in Siberian rain" has the power of a "suckerpunch" to the gut or kidney.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by Starward-Led 27 weeks 16 hours ago
This should be posted as a: This should be posted as a poem, as it is far better than my poem!
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redbrick commented on: Late On The Night Of January 21st, 1924 by Starward-Led 27 weeks 17 hours ago
Wow! And on a corollary: Wow! And on a corollary thought;  A Widow’s Lament in the Age of No Flowers Late on the night of January’s frost, I watched my husband breathe his final cost. They brought him wreathes, they brought him song, they crowned his silence, they called it strong. But I cannot forget the other ground, where no flowers bloom, no bells resound. The Romanov children, stripped and slain, their bodies hidden in Siberian rain. Graveless, cancelled, erased from the page, yet their shadows rise to indict the age. No cenotaph, no marble stone, only whispers where they lie unknown. And I, the widow, dare not tell my comrades of this thought of hell: What if the Faith they sought to kill still tolls its bell, relentless, shrill? For one is celebrated, banners unfurled, while the others are banished from the world. Yet stars above, with hostile light, judge both alike in endless night.  
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redbrick commented on: hearth of language by redbrick 27 weeks 18 hours ago
Thanks so much. Still aiming: Thanks so much. Still aiming at getting an entire poem to soar. I understand that's quite the holy grail. When I think of that it may for some be like Frost's "nothing gold can stay."
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redbrick commented on: Poem true. Names changed? Check Webb by Teytonon 27 weeks 1 day ago
Sounds like the web of: Sounds like the web of Dragnet. Another Jack was a medical examiner, Klugman from Quincy, M.E. 
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