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The imagery is powerful —: The imagery is powerful — dust over the eyes, kicked under the dresser, the sudden shift from being wanted to being overlooked. You captured that kind of loss with real clarity.

You captured the weight of: You captured the weight of inheritance — how land, power, trauma, and blame get passed down whether we want them or not. A strong, necessary reflection.

Thank you for taking the time: Thank you for taking the time to read it. Jessie Trice’s work shaped healthcare for so many families here in Miami, and her story deserves to be remembered. I’m glad the poem opened that door for you.

The way the word breaks down: The way the word breaks down line by line says a lot — it’s like watching humanity fade piece by piece. Strong visual message.

I like how you built the: I like how you built the whole week one letter at a time. The structure itself carries the humor — you can feel the weight of each day stacking up

This was a fun read — the way: This was a fun read — the way you flipped each legend’s name into a rhyme shows real creativity. It captures the spirit of the game and the joy of writing.

A story like this hits the: A story like this hits the heart. Real love doesn’t disappear when life changes — it adapts, protects, and stays present. You wrote that truth with so much grace.