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beaconzbard commented on: UNDER THE STARS by beaconzbard 10 weeks 5 days ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/1Mp5BK3P5O4
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Teytonon commented on: Misery Controlled by LittleLennonGurl 10 weeks 6 days ago
Beautiful, just beautiful..: Beautiful, just beautiful. Expresses my feelings precisely. Hopefully we'll have time to discuss it further when we're both in the re-education camp. See you there!  
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frostbite commented on: Victory Day by SSmoothie 10 weeks 6 days ago
What amazing insight into: What amazing insight into your world. Trixie must be a very addictive person, one that you can never ever ever get enough of. How lucky is the person to have Trixie!
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S74rw4rd commented on: Alpine Melt Water by Spinoza 10 weeks 6 days ago
This is an epic poem, an: This is an epic poem, an accumulation of verbally skilled phrases---some delightfully beautiful, some achingly beautiful, but all beautiful, and all giving full evidence of your superlative artistry as a Poet.  I cannot imagine how much time, or how much preparation, went into the composition of this great achievement; but I can see the great effects on the very screen in front of me.  The poem's purpose is disclosed in the final three lines, and these lines draw all the others together in a perfected orbit.  I was once told or read---so long ago I cannot now cite the source---that the purpose of Poetry is to show how efficiently, effectively and intensely the language can work, and be worked:  and this poem demonstrates that to the Nth degree.
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Teytonon commented on: CAN TREES FALL IN LOVE? by joy 11 weeks 6 hours ago
In answer to your question..: In answer to your question You don't have to guess  Can trees fall in love? The answer is yes   There were two orange trees Standing in a grove One said to the other 'Wanna fall in love?'   The other tree said 'I'd be willing to give it a try  It sounds great, but my answer's no Here's the reason why'   You said 'Wanna fall in love?' You see I'm hot, hot as a stove Don't you know you should've used a word  A word that rhymes with 'grove'?   What the hell's the matter with you? With you, won't waste my time I can't be with someone Who doesn't know a poem must rhyme!   THE END  
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beaconzbard commented on: TO...........WOULD BE............... by beaconzbard 11 weeks 10 hours ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/6bV2bZWdhH4
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georgeschaefer commented on: THANKFUL FOR OLD LOVE by joy 11 weeks 18 hours ago
It's good to take a few: It's good to take a few moments each day to think of things to be thankful for
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Savvart commented on: Abundance by Savvart 11 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you for the kind words: Thank you for the kind words :)
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ramonathompsont commented on: Your blue eyes by geneconner2008 11 weeks 1 day ago
good one: good one
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ramonathompsont commented on: I want to be everything by geneconner2008 11 weeks 1 day ago
sweet poem. too bad romance: sweet poem. too bad romance does not really exist like this.
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beaconzbard commented on: HEAR MY DISTRESS by beaconzbard 11 weeks 1 day ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/RiaG4ZuRQ9k
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SSmoothie commented on: To bring some joy to earth by Spinoza 11 weeks 1 day ago
Beautiful! I love the: Beautiful! I love the analogiesand ideas. The wide eyed innocence and hope! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Diverging Roads by Spinoza 11 weeks 1 day ago
And sometimes that's just the: And sometimes that's just the way is so that's the way it goes! Nicely said and all. 
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arqios commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Poem On Prayer by S74rw4rd 11 weeks 1 day ago
Oh the joy of that hot live: Oh the joy of that hotline, live to Heaven! Prayer is like that red phone in Batman and of course the bat signal. But again, it isn't just the fixed place and time which New Testament faith exemplifies: in their homes, at the temple, in the synagogues, as they went, in each other's company: a truly ever reaching, ever stretching fellowship.
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arqios commented on: Ego – is always the enemy by Spinoza 11 weeks 1 day ago
First thing I encounter as I: First thing I encounter as I rouse from sleep in the morning and wrestle with sometimes quite visibly the rest of my waking hours! 
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