ramble

im falling, floating, lost.

scar coveting scar,

reflection unknown- unrecognised.

scream after scream into nothingness...

when, where, who, why...

what am i doing

where am i

why am i here.

gone.

gone.

gone.

gone.

who am i?

-oh yeah..

nothing.

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S74RW4RD's picture

This is a very powerful

This is a very powerful expression in a very block of time---always a sign of classical talent.


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thank you so much

thank you so much

S74RW4RD's picture

I apologize for the typo in

I apologize for the typo in the comment.  To the best of my recollection, it should have been "very brief block of time."  Sorry about that, I was very ill at the time I wrote it.


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no worries most of my poems

no worries most of my poems are written in a sort of daze and i hit the wrong key when typing dozens of times haha

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Thank you for that reply.

Thank you for that reply.


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