Yes, I’m still alive. Half: Yes, I’m still alive. Half insane, but still here. Forgive me for neglecting your stirring chronicles of spiritual expansion, and I am referring to all your poignant, significant collections.
Here I find myself at the sunrise of your profound connection with the Divine. So inspiring, the many ways God called to you throughout the years and the many ways you heard Him clearly.
It was as if a cosmic spotlight illuminated this classic film just for you and set you on a path of self awareness, unquenchable curiosity and, finally, all encompassing love in both its sublime and human form.
Another sacred signpost on your journey, expressed with engaging sincerity.
Flows like a river of tears: Flows like a river of tears across whole continents, combining oceans with a garland of the surviving water lilies who thrive on the soothing subtle sound of sweet emotion
The new structure is: The new structure is definitely working for you, I think, the stanzas work really nicely together and the poem itself holds up very well as a whole
Yes! Starward yet lives! So: Yay! Starward yet lives! So that we all may relish in those amazingly famous poems of his on the chronicles of sockboy! he-heeeee! To be completely honest, though I am reluctantly shy to admit it, I find I've actually learned quite a lot from said theme; and for that, we thank you.