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Jesster commented on: barefooted at the gate by redbrick 30 weeks 2 days ago
I too : I too love this poem. In fact, I have enjoyed each of your works that I've read so far. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: barefooted at the gate by redbrick 30 weeks 2 days ago
I love this poem, especially: I love this poem, especially its title.
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redbrick commented on: the tan gent by redbrick 30 weeks 3 days ago
Nowhere near your mastery: Nowhere near your mastery level. But still fun! This one was somehow partially inspired by the golden "an" in a tan van 
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Teytonon commented on: the tan gent by redbrick 30 weeks 3 days ago
About the tan gent..: About the tan gent I have breaking news I never accused him of drug abuse  Psychotherapy he might need Never said he smoked weed All I said to the tan gent was 'Hi, pot in use?'  Enjoyed this a lot. Clever wordplay indeed!
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redbrick commented on: letters by redbrick 30 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you so much. Your: Thank you so much. Your comment helps the trajectory of future writes. 
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Jesster commented on: Free Stress by Jesster 30 weeks 3 days ago
I won't die yet: it's too soon for me you'd probably agree I'm not afraid of death if living can't be free
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Teytonon commented on: Free Stress by Jesster 30 weeks 4 days ago
Very true. A lot of truth..: Very true. A lot of truth in a few lines. Well done. Your life may be a total mess, you're about to freak You're looking for an answer, a stress-free life you seek It's easy; food, water, shelter, clothes, are the things I speak  Ignore the necessities of life? You'll die within a week*   *Maybe not a week, but your odds aren't good.
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Jesster commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 30 weeks 4 days ago
ugh: that pit in my stomach is a physical memory
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ramonathompsont commented on: Total Eclipse of The Full Moon Heart by ramonathompsont 30 weeks 4 days ago
oops typo there. thanks for: oops typo there. thanks for letting me know.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Gut Punch by Jesster 30 weeks 5 days ago
There is so much emotive: There is so much emotive truth and wisdom in this poem, from the title right down to the poem's last word.
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Pungus commented on: Rubber Band by Jesster 30 weeks 5 days ago
Only telling you what you: Only telling you what you need to hear. Jess can delete these, if she likes.
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orangejumpsuit commented on: letters by redbrick 30 weeks 5 days ago
Enjoyable: This was nice to read
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Jesster commented on: FREEDOM by joy 30 weeks 6 days ago
truth : truth wish our leaders were responsible to We The People
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Total Eclipse of The Full Moon Heart by ramonathompsont 30 weeks 6 days ago
In the first line, do you: In the first line, do you mean the "man in the moon?"
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Teytonon commented on: Rubber Band by Jesster 30 weeks 6 days ago
Hello..: Hello. Why are you so angry with me? I'm not here to fight with you or anyone else. You certainly have the right not to like what I do. I have no problem with that, but I don't understand the anger behind it  In any event, this is not the appropriate place to make comments like that. If you wish to make a comment to me please send me a private message Thank you
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