Supposed to be a song, it's one of my personnel favorites.
I'm really not sure what this is.... maybe you can tell me? what do you think, and do you think it's crap??
Just getting into poetry and decided to try writing my first sonnet. Fun.
From my unpublished collection called 'A Place Called Time.'
I acually like this poem. I find that reading it, you don't take a breath until the end.