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Take A Deep Breath
Take a deep breath
and then slip under.
Slip under the surface,
take it all in.
Take a deep breath
and look around.
Under here,
away from the normal,
things are not
what you're used to.
Take a deep breath
and go where you've
never gone before.
Go someplace new,
some place different.
You never know what will happen.
This one is really deep (ironic choice of words)
You touched on something so much deeper than the word "relaxing"... I'm not sure what it is. Its thick, its slow, its silent, its like the depth of the ocean. Like the pressure of calming. Interesting!
Cheers,
Adam_San
Your choice of words are lovely!
Lol, yes that is an ironic choice of words :P
Thanks! I am not sure why I wrote it or where it came from, even now, but if people like it, then I guess I did okay :)
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Wow this is really good! Has
Wow this is really good! Has an ethereal yet ominous feel to it, then suddenly the loudspeaker part open to some hope! I really like it! HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
=D thanks!!! If you really do
=D thanks!!! If you really do like it, then thank you sooo much hon!
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IT IS REALLY CRAP!
But it's good crap, the kind I usually get swamped in, looking for some place else when the crap stops here - or it comes to visit or I run into it during my daily breathing, so crap is truly underated, especially if it is yours and even your mistakes, Nikki says, are correct - I have no idea what that means, but it sounds right~~~it's beer night - LOL and smiles and chuckles - Lady A
Thanks.. i think??? the part
Thanks.. i think??? the part about it being crap is interesting...
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