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Mardigan (not verified) commented on:

'Ppreciate it!: 'Ppreciate it!

Good poem!: This is my first read n your portfolio and I look forward to reading more of your work!

daniieGigglez (not verified) commented on:

thank u. it wasnt meant for: thank u. it wasnt meant for any one person but ppl in general. its just how i saw 90% of my school.

I don't want to be: I don't want to be hypocritical with my comment, so i admit I'm guilty of most of the stuff you wrote about..but i don't really do it for recreational reasons or to feel "kool"..its for other reasons. But ANYWAYS this is so true, you basically got the typical teenager figured out Great Poem!

Shits so true dude, pretty: Shits so true dude, pretty much got people nowadays in a nutshell.

Kick ass dude!: Kick ass dude!

You're welcome!: And the drawing is fantastic.

daniieGigglez (not verified) commented on:

i love how u analyzed the: i love how u analyzed the poem nicely done:) an i have a way with words too lol im doing much better now being carerful wit who im with an all:D ^_^ an my best friend/other half drew it. she is an amazing artist!

First of all...: Nice poem! Its really interesting - by itself, the first two pairs of verses (1 & 2 and 3 & 4) don't do well on their own; but what's really fascinating is that they WORK NICELY when it all is read as a whole, the entire poem! So that's cool. Its also interesting how that all forces one to read the poem - I find myself pausing before saying "stops spinning around" or "the world's...

Missin the one: Hi Daniie, nice to have you as a friend on pp. wish to you well with your writing., this is a nice poem for your sweetie. happy writing heather

Mardigan (not verified) commented on:

Thank you for your kind: Thank you for your kind comment! :>

!!!!!: this was awesome!! i loved it!! :)

yes!: Gorgeous! I totally loved it! :D!

:): Very Good i like it

Beautiful poem! You have a: Beautiful poem! You have a way with words. :)

I like this poem. Very: I like this poem. Very contradicting, very human! Very real.

I adore this! : Thanks!

Do you understand?: Shakra is amazing isn't it?

Sample me some. : Love it in all it's simplicity.

well: one of my favorate things to do is use repatition as a device to smash the points of the poem like a brick into somones skull, however i liked the reversal you did with it good read my freind.

This too is also thought provoking! : Nice one!

Mardigan (not verified) commented on:

Hey Smoothie, appreciate the: Hey Smoothie, appreciate the comment, I am glad that it reached ya. -Matt

I like the mysteriousness of: I like the mysteriousness of this poem. The ending is particularly mysterious. I like that. However I feel that the rhymes hurt this poem. Rhyming in contemporary poetry usually weakens the poem.

Mardigan (not verified) commented on:

Thanks John, I appreciate: Thanks John, I appreciate that.