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patriciajj commented on: asteriskos by redbrick 2 years 2 weeks ago
Your heart-stopping: Your heart-stopping metaphorical wizardry captures the cosmic experience, and that's no small accomplishment. Of course you'd be up to the task. Gorgeous! 
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patriciajj commented on: Straight but splintered by Pungus 2 years 2 weeks ago
Your cunning use of paradox: Your cunning use of paradox illustrates brilliant madness. Delicious and astonishing word play. Loving the trip!  
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; The Stars *+You, Lord+* Established [Psalm 8:3] by J4nu4r14n 2 years 2 weeks ago
A bolt of elation runs: A bolt of elation runs through this incredibly uplifting song of praise. Living light. God bless you. 
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Starward commented on: The Biggest Challenges Facing Internet Marketing And How An Agency Can Help by twelve12 2 years 2 weeks ago
How, may I ask, can this be: How, may I ask, can this be considered a poem?
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Starward commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: WallStones; Anticipating The Event by J4nu4r14n 2 years 2 weeks ago
Thank you so much; coming: Thank you so much; coming from you, quite a compliment!!!
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Pungus commented on: @ 27.225 MHz: WallStones; Anticipating The Event by J4nu4r14n 2 years 2 weeks ago
Much like Lem: I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
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Starward commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by J4nu4r14n 2 years 2 weeks ago
Thank you for the reply. : Thank you for the comment.  First let me apologize for the typo in her name, which I have just now corrected.  My theory would not support a book's length; it is presented in a short poem which was posted to this site; and its original posting was on the premiere Ripper website, Casebook Jack the Ripper, in London, in January 2001.  That was my first ever poem posted on the internet.      Mary Kelly is a fascinating person, even with what little we know of her.  We know she was considered very beautiful, was of small stature, but curvy.  She was not a streetwalker; she was what we would now term an "outcall" girl.  Though she lived in East London, several of her clients resided in the more affluent West end; some people believed that one of her clients was a member of the Prime Minister's cabinet.  She was fluent in French and Welsh, as well as English, and one of her landlords remembered a crate of books which accompanied her to the various residences she occupied during her brief adult life:  these books were fine editions of the nineteenth century novels that we now teach in our high school English courses.  Her "outcalls" were not always just for sex:  she was also invited to fine dining, and to West end theaters.  She was, apparently, very good company.  From time to time, she worked as a model for the painter, Walt Sickert; in the 1940's, when Sickert's son, Joe, was on his deathbed, he said that his father had fallen in love with Mary Kelly sometime before the Ripper attack; and that every female Sickert ever painted after 1888 was Mary Kelly.  I believe Sickert knew that she had killed the Ripper in self-defense, and helped her to escape the country---most likely to France, which was a country she had visited during a vacation in 1887, where she was fluent in the language.  I believe that there is yet an old trunk in some old house, up in the attic, covered with dust, which, when opened, will give to us a diary, or letters, or some indication of what happened to her after 1888.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by J4nu4r14n 2 years 2 weeks ago
Not what I'd imagine looking into beside the Christmas tree!: Hugely fascinating, none the less. Did you ever consider putting your theory together into a book publication?
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: wilderness by tula 2 years 2 weeks ago
Pretty words, pretty flow.: Pretty words, pretty flow.
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Starward commented on: Succor by shewhodwellsint... 2 years 2 weeks ago
Thank you, and I am very: Thank you, and I am very grateful to you for posting this poem.  I have read and re-read it several times.  It is fascinating, and, though brief, it is profound as well.
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Starward commented on: The Empty Page by LornaRJ 2 years 2 weeks ago
This is an excellent: This is an excellent spiritual poem!
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Teytonon commented on: STILL AN OPTIMIST by joy 2 years 2 weeks ago
This is a wonderful poem.: This is a wonderful poem. The world needs more people like you. Thanks for posting!
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Starward commented on: Thirty Miles Out to Sea by RainerBukowski 2 years 2 weeks ago
Both the wording of the poem,: Both the wording of the poem, and its format on the screen, are very powerful.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Thirty Miles Out to Sea by RainerBukowski 2 years 2 weeks ago
Powerful, capturing finish: Really captured, and trying to unravel, your final 5 lines and their deeper meaning, drawing from the whole poem. Most specifically, "The love I thought I found / was nothing but my fear, / I fear." Tones of a devastating awakening, yet ultimately a profound and existential awakening in the end.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Peaceless by mittens4444 2 years 2 weeks ago
Touching poem: Wish not for the death of hearts that beat. When fingers that can feel cracks become extinct, thus hope is severed from humankind for good.
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