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It was a good time watch the eclipse!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vw9d3YlysS0

 

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S74RW4RD's picture

Although brief, this poem

Although brief, this poem presents a very powerful imagery and an emotional effect that my poor words cannot adequately describe, except to say thank you for sharing its beauty with us.


Starward

redbrick's picture

And most likely briefly

And most likely briefly powerful in the same breath. A very delicate balance, much like the oriental forms of poetry. It requires a finer movement in curating both in the production and reception/hosting. And my gratitude is great for your having hosted this and other like poems. As vassals of the Muse we are compelled to host anything that issued forth from the Muse's fount, in a manner of understanding.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

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S74RW4RD's picture

Reading this, I now realize

Reading this, I now realize it is one of the best summaries of the poetic vocation that I have ever read.  In its comprehension of the large purpose of poetry, your words are textbook-perfectl


Starward

redbrick's picture

I am grateful for this return

I am grateful for this return visit and kind regard for it, this poem that assumes naught but to be. Herein lay a gladdened heart.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver

SSmoothie's picture

Lovely, mystical and captures

Lovely, mystical and captures the event in a hauntingly beautiful way! Cheerss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

redbrick's picture

Thanks most kindly. It really

Thanks most kindly. It really helps when we are aware of what the poems do. You are most appreciated.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver

patriciajj's picture

Your heart-stopping

Your heart-stopping metaphorical wizardry captures the cosmic experience, and that's no small accomplishment. Of course you'd be up to the task. Gorgeous! 

redbrick's picture

Many thanks Patricia. I am

Many thanks Patricia. I am glad of it and hoping for more poetic journeys down the road.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver