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redbrick commented on: further down the aisle by redbrick 45 weeks 4 days ago
Sounds somewhat familiar of a: Sounds somewhat familiar of a younger self that has now been overgrown by years and layers of dust.
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redbrick commented on: between the hours by redbrick 45 weeks 4 days ago
A most complimenting response: A most complimenting response to any poem. Cheers, Pursia 
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J-C4113D commented on: What Is Woke? by ramonathompsont 45 weeks 4 days ago
Excellent poem.  The Gospel: Excellent poem.  The Gospel expects believers to show mercy, kindness and acceptance.  The innkeeper who presently lives in the White House is not a believer and, apparently, is unaware of those requirements.  His constipated ignorance of the Gospel will help him rip apart the fabric of our nation without a pang of conscience.
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Pursia commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Sijo For A Young Man Corporately Employed, And A Homosexual Delectation In Seoul [ /;\ ] by Starward-Led 45 weeks 4 days ago
Yes, I see.: Yes, I see.
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J-C4113D commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Sijo For A Young Man Corporately Employed, And A Homosexual Delectation In Seoul [ /;\ ] by Starward-Led 45 weeks 4 days ago
Oh well, okay.  I was hoping: Oh well, okay.  I was hoping for further insight into your rather unique perception of the poem.  I can assure you that the actual experience, decades ago, was exquisite
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Pursia commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Sijo For A Young Man Corporately Employed, And A Homosexual Delectation In Seoul [ /;\ ] by Starward-Led 45 weeks 4 days ago
I sincerely doubt I could: With all due respect, sirrah, I sincerely doubt I could
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J-C4113D commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Sijo For A Young Man Corporately Employed, And A Homosexual Delectation In Seoul [ /;\ ] by Starward-Led 45 weeks 4 days ago
Could you elaborate?  I wrote: Could you elaborate?  I wrote this from experience, only changing the geographical setting.
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Pursia commented on: This Is Our Turning Point by ramonathompsont 45 weeks 4 days ago
I agree with Starward.: I agree with Starward.
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Pursia commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Sijo For A Young Man Corporately Employed, And A Homosexual Delectation In Seoul [ /;\ ] by Starward-Led 45 weeks 4 days ago
Well they most certainly do: Well they most certainly do NOT, monsignor!
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Pursia commented on: between the hours by redbrick 45 weeks 4 days ago
Not sure why exactly, but I: Not sure why exactly, but I spent my whole time reading this poem 'smiling the smile I made a couple of hours ago, still warm in its pocket.' hahaha
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redbrick commented on: who dares, opens by redbrick 45 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you so much dear: Thank you so much dear Ramona. Your thoughts are much appreciated 
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J-C4113D commented on: This Is Our Turning Point by ramonathompsont 45 weeks 4 days ago
Good poem, undermined only : Good poem, undermined only  by the "U and I," which looks childish.  You are better than that, and writing out "you and I" is not too much to ask of a poem of this quality.
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J-C4113D commented on: Is Trump Going Too Far? by ramonathompsont 45 weeks 4 days ago
Excellent!  The Innkeeper: Excellent!  The Innkeeper sold his soul years ago, and is acting out his ultimare damnation while still ahead of it.  And, like his spiritual mentor, the devil, he wants others to join him; thus, he imposes his demands upon us.  John Milton's characterization of the devil in the epic poem, Paradise Lost, is very timely and appropriate as a guide to the Innkeeper's internal terrain. 
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ramonathompsont commented on: DAILY GRATITUDE ALOHA SPIRIT by joy 45 weeks 4 days ago
thumbs up!: thumbs up!
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ramonathompsont commented on: who dares, opens by redbrick 45 weeks 4 days ago
powerful visual: powerful visual
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