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S74r5p4r3d commented on: a new vision of bodies unbound by redbrick 29 weeks 6 days ago
When you post a poem, you are: When you post a poem, you are not just filling a screen, but creating an event because of the quality of your verbal artistry.  This particular poem, a reimagining or new interpretation of Genesis 3 approaches its subject with a new perspective but takes it place among the best of ancient iterations of the sacred subject.  I especially like the way the poem moves from wandering, in line 1, to settling in a dwelling of wonder in line 20.
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justshan1983 commented on: The Stories in my Head by justshan1983 29 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you : Thank you for reading, and always remember!
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Jesster commented on: The Stories in my Head by justshan1983 29 weeks 6 days ago
Relatable to me: Thank you for sharing and reminding me
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redbrick commented on: starlight pact by redbrick 30 weeks 1 day ago
Am sure that a time will come: Am sure that a time will come when the words shall present themselves of their own accord. thanks as always.
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redbrick commented on: unlikely wedded minds by redbrick 30 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you so much. And: Thank you so much. And language is indeed powerful when we pay close attention to it and respect it.
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S74r5p4r3d commented on: Ingathering by alwalclif 30 weeks 1 day ago
I really like this poem.  The: I really like this poem.  The autumnal imagery is deployed in a way that is not just merely read, but is also felt---in the soul, and in the gut.  As a child, I always enjoyed Autumn, and this poem remminded me of those memories.  I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme, although the last stanza tossed it away, and I think you could write a better version of that last stanza. But, overall, this poem has been a great reading experience.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Hulk Hogan RIP by Teytonon 30 weeks 1 day ago
thank you for this tribute to: thank you for this tribute to a great man. have many fond childhood memories of him
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S74r5p4r3d commented on: starlight pact by redbrick 30 weeks 4 days ago
More beautiful than my poor: More beautiful than my poor words can describe!!!
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S3ryddwr_4p_110yd commented on: unlikely wedded minds by redbrick 30 weeks 5 days ago
I love the process this poem: I love the process this poem describes, and the succinct but powerful way the language functions.
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S3ryddwr_4p_110yd commented on: Reading Saint Paul's Greetings by S74rw4rd-13d 30 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you. Rae.: Thank you. Rae.
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ramonathompsont commented on: A Gay Priest by ramonathompsont 30 weeks 5 days ago
thanks for the great: thanks for the great feedback!  
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S74r5p4r3d commented on: At Routine Duty On Friday, About Noon by S74rw4rd-13d 31 weeks 3 hours ago
Rae, I miss you very much,: Rae, I miss you very much, but I will see you in Heaven when I get there.
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HappilyAlone commented on: Questioning Love by HappilyAlone 31 weeks 20 hours ago
This did not age well...: We have been divorced for almost 3 years.
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redbrick commented on: out from under by redbrick 31 weeks 2 days ago
Which is why I try before I: Which is why I try before I could no longer....
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redbrick commented on: out from under by redbrick 31 weeks 2 days ago
I too do that sometimes....: I too do that sometimes.... it's probably the way the site is designed, like the save button right next to the delete button, there's always a 50-50 chance either way!
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