When you post a poem, you are: When you post a poem, you are not just filling a screen, but creating an event because of the quality of your verbal artistry. This particular poem, a reimagining or new interpretation of Genesis 3 approaches its subject with a new perspective but takes it place among the best of ancient iterations of the sacred subject. I especially like the way the poem moves from wandering, in line 1, to settling in a dwelling of wonder in line 20.
I really like this poem. The: I really like this poem. The autumnal imagery is deployed in a way that is not just merely read, but is also felt---in the soul, and in the gut. As a child, I always enjoyed Autumn, and this poem remminded me of those memories. I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme, although the last stanza tossed it away, and I think you could write a better version of that last stanza. But, overall, this poem has been a great reading experience.
I too do that sometimes....: I too do that sometimes.... it's probably the way the site is designed, like the save button right next to the delete button, there's always a 50-50 chance either way!