I am as enchanted by this: I am as enchanted by this poem in the same way as the first poems I ever read during my adolescence. I have kept it open in my browser since mid-morning (and it is now 1:18pm EST). One of the compensations with which my old age and declining health have been blessed is to have been able to see this great outpouring of your Poetry and, especially, this particular Poem.
Revisiting this, I feel: Revisiting this, I feel exactly the same as my comment in 2003. In my old age, I am haunted by Pompeii, although I take comfort from the presence of the Rosary Cathedral in the city's vicinity.
I understand your style is: I understand your style is very self aware and committed to the poetic mastery of deliberate meaningless redundancy, but, in my opinion, if you choose to continue to drop these Names, I think you should begin considering to add a sort of string-cheese personality to merit their storied criminal development inheriting Jesus persona or aroma on these pages in order to create more depth, I guess, etc... Nevertheless, I do enjoy your work very much and truly do believe you to be quite brilliant, indeed... Cheers!!