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Pursia commented on: Ruin by tallsquirrelgirl 11 weeks 22 hours ago
I can see this one presented: I can see this one presented in videotape, the way you say 'watercolor fade' beautiful word by the way, fade, say it slowly 'faaade' makes me smile inside
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Pursia commented on: Tide by tallsquirrelgirl 11 weeks 22 hours ago
eloquently encapsulated, clap: eloquently encapsulated, clap clap clap, lol
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Teytonon commented on: Ears Still Ringing by tallsquirrelgirl 11 weeks 23 hours ago
I recently had a..: I recently had a problem with ringing in my ears as well. I solved it by setting my ears to 'vibrate'. Try it, it may work for you too.
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Teytonon commented on: PEN OF PASSION by wisdomscry 11 weeks 23 hours ago
wisdomscry Gail Clarke..: wisdomscry Gail Clarke = C y I'm a gas..killer words, c?  
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alex73 commented on: Unsure by alex73 11 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you : Imagine how much less stress we would have if we could always be ourselves
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redbrick commented on: lights turned inward by redbrick 11 weeks 1 day ago
You got it! : You got it! 
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redbrick commented on: + 9TH POEMS: θυσίαν αἴνεσις Gerund Endings by S74rw4rd-13d 11 weeks 1 day ago
Just glad you picked up on: Just glad you picked up on that. I aimed for it to sound like it came out of Liturgy. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: + 9TH POEMS: θυσίαν αἴνεσις Gerund Endings by S74rw4rd-13d 11 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you for that; thank: Thank you for that; thank you very much!   I apologize for my delay in reply.  For reasons I am too old to learn, my G-Mail is not delivering my norifications right:  some get left out.  No disrespect intended and no lack of gratitude implied.  Your poem reads like it comes out of a Liturgy, and that is a reflection of your soul.
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Pursia commented on: lights turned inward by redbrick 11 weeks 1 day ago
Like wild fire, we pillage: Like wild fire, we pillage the treasure, a thunderous plunder
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Pursia commented on: rabbits ribbit ribbons by Pungus 11 weeks 1 day ago
You are the 'My Majesty' at: You are the 'My Majesty' at the end, hands down, bound whore bowed over in silk Nunskirt of worship lol
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C03ru135c3n7 commented on: On Products And Items That Are Said To "Drop" Or Are "Dropping" (What A Stupid Phrase) by S74rw4rd-13d 11 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you, and yes I agree. : Thank you, and yes I agree.  Drop implies damage or fecal waste.  When my adopted parents wanted to embarrass me, they sometimes said I had been dropped on my head before the adoption; in school, I dropped a class I had no chance of passing; and my father remarked about the neighbor's boxer dog, once, by saying, "That damn Mike just dropped a pile like I have never seen before."  (Mike, the neighbor's senior dog, did have very active and efficient bowels.)
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redbrick commented on: Unsure by alex73 11 weeks 1 day ago
What I like about this piece: What I like about this piece is its honesty, it gets right to the heart of that tug‑of‑war between who we want to be and who we have to be. The simplicity of the language makes the truth hit harder: most of us bend to duty, but the rare moments when want and have align are where happiness lives.
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redbrick commented on: On Products And Items That Are Said To "Drop" Or Are "Dropping" (What A Stupid Phrase) by S74rw4rd-13d 11 weeks 1 day ago
So true! In my head I feel: So true! In my head I feel like running from overpriced, damaged goods. You just don't drop things for sale. 
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redbrick commented on: rabbits ribbit ribbons by Pungus 11 weeks 1 day ago
  Mate, that piece is pure:   Mate, that piece is pure chaos: frogs raining, rabbits ribbiting, monocles and cannons; like someone spliced Dostoevsky with Joyce and then set it loose on a cruise ship. The Rossaforts? Total posh caricatures, staring through binoculars while the world burns. And the poor narrator’s stuck as a slave on deck, railing against shallow imaginations. It’s satire, it’s absurdism, it’s cosmic futility all rolled into one. Honestly, Pursia, it’s like a fever dream dressed up in a top hat. 
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ramonathompsont commented on: MAKE THIS DAY COUNT by joy 11 weeks 2 days ago
Amen! Wonderful advice!: Amen! Wonderful advice!
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