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redbrick commented on: consolation in the kitchen by redbrick 17 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you so much. : Thank you so much. 
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orangejumpsuit commented on: Tropical medicine by orangejumpsuit 17 weeks 1 day ago
Thanks, i just fart it out: Thanks, i just fart it out
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Pursia commented on: Tropical medicine by orangejumpsuit 17 weeks 2 days ago
"necrotic tendrils like black: "necrotic tendrils like black starfish" simply must applaud
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ramonathompsont commented on: CHILDREN OF THE STARS by joy 17 weeks 2 days ago
well written! a beauty of a: well written! a beauty of a piece!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: consolation in the kitchen by redbrick 17 weeks 2 days ago
You describe, very well!!!,: You describe, very well!!!, one of the universal issues that comes with being human.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: in the waning light by redbrick 17 weeks 2 days ago
This poem is excellent (as: This poem is excellent (as yours always are), and that final stanza is a real powerhouse.  It reminded me of the dry bones' song in T. S. Eliot's poem, Ash Wednesday.  And any poem that can remind me of his great achievement is a wonderful poem, indeed.
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redbrick commented on: unfinished in udder confusion by redbrick 17 weeks 3 days ago
Many thanks, Jordan! So much: Many thanks, Jordan! So much brokenness around us and in our lives it could be presumed as well. Most appreciated 
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Savvart commented on: The Brave Art of Love by Savvart 17 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you for your wonderful: Thank you for your wonderful comment and expression of the quality of my poem. It is so deeply appreciated :)
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J-C4113d commented on: Protest Ice? by ramonathompsont 17 weeks 4 days ago
That final line must have, in: That final line must have, in some form, heard by Bolshevik Lenin when he ordered the execution of Russia's royal family; and by the Bavarian housepainter when he was appointed chancellor of Germany in January, 1933.
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: unfinished in udder confusion by redbrick 17 weeks 5 days ago
Very creative : Such a great metaphor of imagery and sacrifice. Plant orange cones and watering them with IOUs sounds like broken promises. 
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: “Hardest Thing I Ever Had to Do” by elliot_jordan2003 17 weeks 5 days ago
Wow: Wow Redbrick thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. A relationship is fun bu the break up is definitely hard especially when those memories fade. 
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redbrick commented on: “Hardest Thing I Ever Had to Do” by elliot_jordan2003 18 weeks 3 hours ago
Your song-like poem captures: Your song-like poem captures heartbreak in such a raw, straightforward way.  The struggle to “turn off” love feels so real here. I especially felt the line about the hardest part being “the time you spent to miss,” because it shows how love lingers in memory even when the relationship is gone.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Goodbye Ace Frehley by randyjohnson 18 weeks 11 hours ago
Amen! : Amen! 
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patriciajj commented on: What Survives by patriciajj 18 weeks 19 hours ago
I’m overjoyed that you found: I’m overjoyed that you found some comfort in my expression and that you, so generously, took the time to dive deep with exquisite and precise insights. Coming from you that’s a coveted gift.    I’m still praying for your wellbeing and wishing you the very best of everything. You are a beacon. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: almostness remains by redbrick 18 weeks 23 hours ago
The superlative profundity of: The superlative profundity of your poetic vision and verbal skill are well on display in this remarkable poem..  I am always awasg in waves of awe when I read your poetry.
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