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sweetwater commented on: In A Frenzy by Stephen 18 weeks 6 days* ago* I love the visual images you: I love the visual images you have created in this, particularly the 'broken ornaments on a dried up Christmas tree'. Sue. [ go to comment ]
sweetwater commented on: Delusional Paradise by Stephen 18 weeks 6 days* ago* I think this is a perfect: I think this is a perfect summing up. Sue. [ go to comment ]
sweetwater commented on: Sordid by Stephen 18 weeks 6 days* ago* I like this very much :-): I like this very much :-) sue. [ go to comment ]
S74RW4RD commented on: July 10th, A Saturday In 1976 by S74RW4RD 19 weeks 6 hours* ago* Thank you for that very: Thank you for that very encouraging comment. There is still more to come, as Starward morphs into J-Called.. Although I do not fully understand the path upon which God has placed me, nor fully understand the terrain that surrounds my path, my Faith tells me to continue because there are great promises and joys at the conclusion of that path. I very much appreciate your kind words, and the time you invested in reading my essay. [ go to comment ]
cynosure commented on: Green Eyes In Shadow’s Silhouette by cynosure 19 weeks 14 hours* ago* He is now on Rainbow Bridge RIP Mr Kitty: Mr Kitty is now no longer in pain and at rest. I, on the other hand, am a big mess. But I need to get it together for a client soon. The vet says she can’t smell where he voided on me. I can’t smell anything as I’m full of tears and mucus. [ go to comment ]
cynosure commented on: July 10th, A Saturday In 1976 by S74RW4RD 19 weeks 14 hours* ago* Thank you for sharing: Your celebratory journey of self-discovery and transformation is an amazing read. It is also unfortunately, at times, much too relatable reading of those difficulties and struggles you faced. However, hearing how you were able to shed those old, socially enforced identities and embrace a new one that truly resonated with you, is powerful. The way you describe finding your handle, Starwatcher, is so beautifully. It is so important to see and learn how you found the strength and freedom through this process. The bond you formed with BlueShift and the adventures you shared with your c.b. radio sound like truly transformative, magical memories that shaped your path. Thank you for sharing this moment of growth and liberation with us. [ go to comment ]
S74RW4RD commented on: Hands Down The Absolute Worst Poem Anyone’s Ever Written by life_used_to_be... 19 weeks 15 hours* ago* I disagree with the poem's: I disagree with the poem's titlel The poem is powerfully poignant. [ go to comment ]
hollow.point commented on: Where are you by ChryWizard 19 weeks 3 days* ago* I am sorry for your: I am sorry for your condition, and I'm sorry that you lost from the hope that you grasped all the things that it cost, in the end we're alone but not because we didn't try - rather hope is not sure, even why did I try. i like flowers and beautiful things like clothes, but alas I have none, not even a single Rose. [ go to comment ]
Pingus commented on: Sandwich (2024 challenge day 32) by tallsquirrelgirl 20 weeks 1 day* ago* Not so challenging, it would appear: Hey, these little Poetry 'challenges' of yours are paying off so divinely the result I cant stop myself from savoring the beauty and truth of your sweet, despairing sandwiches. But so delicious, and well worth the trip to the grocery store, you know, for more and more. [ go to comment ]
Pingus commented on: One for the money, two for the show by Teytonon 20 weeks 1 day* ago* Literally shit on a biscuit: Dude, stop posting this shit and learn to write, like actually. [ go to comment ]
weepingwoman commented on: D's Critique/Analysis of... by weepingwoman 20 weeks 2 days* ago* D's Favorite Lines... : of the moment... subtexted Res Ipsa Loquitur... subjected to Tabula Rasa... at D's whim & fancy... I forever take refuge... sway with me baby... you put the lighter inside this man... you're so fine, lose my mind and the world seems to disappear... oh girl I'll build your wishing well... and I'll fix your old beat-up Chevy truck and make it run like new again... your mountain of firewood isn't big enough... I'll be back tomorrow with more... of whatever you need... I'm here to take care of all your problems even before you have them... the love you've got is only all the love that I would ever need... I'm your huckleberry... exactly the way Val says it... and I'm you're daisy Doc... damn you look good in that hat... tuckle up yourself with me... find what you love and let it kill you... all sciences are not the wisdom true... many seeming thats are not THE That... many trees bear nought of fruit... make lonely caves thy home paternal... and solitude thy paradise... omvajrasattvasamaya... Hail Mary Full of Grace... [ go to comment ]
osiriss- commented on: Right Here With You by DaveBrowder 20 weeks 2 days* ago* I really like your poetry: I really like your poetry [ go to comment ]
weepingwoman commented on: Circular File #2 by weepingwoman 20 weeks 4 days* ago* these have already been sifted through... : to question my virtue is an act of treason... him and the imp are doing an act at McKenna's Treehouse... hey look madlibs... in the back of the closet... Christian LaCroix for the House of My Sweet Dakini... pink patent leather... vegan... with white polka dots... in the back of the closet... hey D I found a hole in the back of the closet... I'm sure that's where they're coming in... hey where did those queer eye guys go... now I lay me down to sleep... I heard he can do this thing with his tongue... she can do it with anything... just give her 1 line... I can't find my voice... I think she left it over by the well... has anyone seen D's gloves... oh no girl those are real... there were 3 of them... Tyrion to the set of 300... tell Hagrid to bring in the Medusa... she definitely seems to be experiencing some sort of... tell him I don't want to talk about my mother anymore... who let him in here... he got it from Biff... he's not a real doctor... I found this stethoscope over by the well... she thinks she can control it... no Hunter you tell her she can't have another piece of birthday cake ... 3000 degrees... found on Mars... in her desk in her cave... in the Himalayas... is that some new guy she's dating... no he's gay... Enhancing Lotion over on aisle 3... looks like peanut butter to me... it's completely unintelligible... undecipherable... nah that's right... who's the new guy... I think his name is Miketoo... we need to hose her down... bring the pink elephant to me... too hot... too cold... fever of 3000 degrees... call Dr. Jones... could be Atlantean in origin... she has relatives there... I thought you burned that letter... she won't open it... not even the baby aspirin... probst called... snookie called... there's a situation under the whomping willow... call the creepy grounds keeper... Scooby Doo Be Doo... where are you... I found this mystery machine keychain... the dam is about to break... we need another box of Kleenex... here's the little Dutch boy... finally took his finger out of the damn dam... regularly scheduled programming... there's a twister coming... and it's heading my way... sometimes I grow so tired... dinner with Led Zeppelin... at Johnny's place... on the island of Eros... ramble on... nows the time... the time is now... wake up D! you fell asleep for a minute and a half... we had a pact... Johnny called... he needs us... spotted on the island of Eros... at the reopening of the viper room... vip only... blue feather boas for the whole audience... and spotted faux fur snow lion lined gloves... hey check out the gift bag... look it's the mother of undying time... on the red carpet... with the gatekeeper to the unknown... at the Dakini-themed met gala... I will be your shepherd in the night... say it 3 times... and click your heels together... don't give that to her... it's too early... can't be imitated... a new kind of comedy... surfing the zuvuya... Aquaman called... no that didn't work either... oh no she just pulled the devil card... ai o dios mio... and the hierophant... that's good right... who's the knight of swords... is that some new guy she's dating... Daario Naharis called... which one... nevermind send them both in... he pledges his sword to you... we should check IMDB ... or Wikipedia... or HBO... do not Google him... we'll have to shut production down for the day... GoT marathon... whoop whoop ... honey grab that jar of peanut butter... look it's that cute delivery boy again... Grandmeister Tarley called... they need a new props guy at the wall... aieee she pulled the I've known you for lifetimes oracle card... so romantic... stop trying to force feed me... we could watch GoT and HotD at the same time... and ozzy found this in her underwater grotto on the island of Eros: §∆¥€E=Mπ√¢£∆¥€^√π¥€¢∆£¥€∆§π√✓✓✓^°1+1=3@#$$$$$$$ [ go to comment ]
weepingwoman commented on: The Pink Portal by weepingwoman 20 weeks 5 days* ago* finally we have a title... : personally I like "The Pink Dakini Sutra"... [ go to comment ]
weepingwoman commented on: what did you say your name was... by weepingwoman 20 weeks 5 days* ago* RE: RE: The Dailies... : what there's no more room on your desk... and he's all soapy... yes the Dakini Pink one... from the Domestic Goddess cafe... with white polka dots... & Laundrymat... yeah that doesn't look right... at Gordon Ramsay's Dakini-themed restaurant... at Walt Disney's Dakini-themed Theme Park... on Venus... thank Kali for cut n paste... you know there's an app that'll do that for you... I heard he was doing such a great job they gave him another line... Scriptboy!... let's watch... can she carry her notebook piled 6 inches high with her days notes... and her pipe and the Dante's Inferno ... and the Pepto, and her [insert name of D's favorite cocktail]... Pepto mixed with ?... Amrit Nectar... girl that sounds delicious... what should we call it... 10 inches high... will she make it from the kitchen to the bedroom... without making 2 trips... while juggling? bricks, chainsaws... dammit I need another set of arms... down to my last gummy... yeah that doesn't look right.. he's wearing her apron... we don't need dishes, hell we don't even need to eat... if we quit eating we won't need dishes... Dakini seen sipping a glowing pink drink at Studio 54... always keep em guessing D... they'll never know where we'll show up... or toilet paper... next... you do see what's happening here honey... has anybody seen the vial of Basilisk venom... we're looking for a bigger shoebox ... oh my god Ms D... when's the last time you cleaned in here girl... no wonder she gots mice... wake up D!... Johnny just called... he needs us, we gotta go... lacks plotline & focus... woman in a bright yellow kimono and blue feather boa... seen crying at the feet of... the Virgin Mary statue... at the Catholic Church in Taylor... on the bulletin board... at the Country Store on Concho Hwy... Dakini Seeks... I heard she was looking for a plumber... found the notes she took while her dad was dying... save it for the biopic... yeah we're gonna have to build a bigger boat for that shot... I heard he got a promotion... Lady Gaga partying with Kali and Christian Siriano at Studio 54 after the McQueen show... reorder gummies... it's a failsafe system D... a great way to organize your thoughts... you should try it missus... this isn't the mitchell hedges skull... he looks like Lord Varys, but he sounds like Ramsey Snow... I think it's ay.. almost out of gummies... you will bring it to me Dr. Jones... she needs to hit the J harder... we're out of that... try some of the Oreoz & Birthday Cake... no that one doesn't work for her anymore... "touch your lips just so I know"... I didn't know Dave was in town... oh no Hunter, we're down to our last gummie... yeah that doesn't look right... I'll split it with you... you take it D, I'm still reeling from the experiment at La Chorrera... "Crash into me baby..."... put lighters and bananas on the list... "and I'll come into you..."... oh no hide the Super Buff Cherry... is that what she's calling it now... and these are from over by the well... some of them are wet... milady a mixtape has arrived for you from 1984... the return address says Anthony, Hollin Hall, VA... she still has naked pics of him... how big is it... he's doing the dishes... "Hello it's me"... "I'll stop the world and melt with you"... send it back... in big pink letters... yeah that's a pretty obscure reference, they're not gonna get that... She + T 4ever... and these were on the kitchen table.... under 6 months of mail... I say they lack vision... and your name sounds like it's a nasal passage irrigation system... go decapitate him Kali... you're sure Mistress... my sword is yours... ommanipadmehum... yeah there were like 10,000 of those... tayataombekhandzebekhandze... and those too... what language is that... Portuguese? Swahili?... Swahili sounds funnier... have wardrobe send samples of yellow silk to... dammit this pen is running out of... The McKenna Center for Psychedelic Psilocybin Psychical Research... & Studies... & Biosphere of rare psychoactive plants... and rare books... reorder Dante's Inferno and Devil's Mistress... forgive me father for I have sinned... and Dark Rainbow... and Indy found this under the whomping willow... I waited but you never came... oh she came honey just not there... and not with him... here's a note from Ms D... I don't know why I didn't come... and these are from yesterday... relax missus we don't gotta be anywhere for like 2 weeks... you were supposed to be taking notes... Everyone was at Studio 54... seen walking into Studio 54 dressed like an Egyptian... he left a bottle on the counter... he named it after her... aieee like the song... My Sweet Dakini's Delight... it's so romantic... and just look at that color... yeah that still doesn't look right... doing the twist with Ms D and DD and DL and We like they did last summer... oh no she just pulled The Tower card... you should come with us sometime Mr. E... oh no she found his picture in a shoebox in the closet... the one that was ducttaped shut... yeah that doesn't look right... when she was cleaning... girl that is not what she was doing in there... it tastes just like the Boone's Farm Tickle Pink we used to drink when she was a teenager... decapitated body found in Silver Creek... State Farm is there... and for godssakes don't let her watch Jersey Shore... aieee that Pauly D... girl that hair... Pauly D spotted at CBGBs with Ms D and DD and DL and G&T and We... no it's not too much... yeah that doesn't look right... can someone please check the spelling on "CBGBs"... Liza waltzes alone at Studio 54... "Where'd Everybody go?"... did you leave her by herself again... honey you can't do that... but the dishes... where the fuck is Johnny with the Amrit Nectar... I'm going to Walmart for more Nutella... and batteries... someone try and pry that spoon out of her hand... mouth?... hey Jake from State Farm... somebody needs to take that jar outside... Ms D said not to touch it... fucking hell... My Sweet Dakini reveals... at the McQueen show... "I'm speechless"... dammit... there's green fur growing on it... a thousand pens in this... the skull does not speak to everyone it seems... house and not one... of them... works... her mom used to say that... we will turn you into us... you won't even know it's happening... Indiana Jones it's about time you showed up... Johnny call Brad, see if he can get the McKenna Brothers for the Belize job... and Survivor... [ go to comment ]