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Thank you, Patricia. As: Thank you, Patricia. As always, your thoughtful and kind review is a appreciated, pleasant find. I wish the inspiration to pen, as you put it, an attempt at a "razor-sharp skewering" of the war-lauding corporate press wasn't a necessity. But, perhaps, never has it been more required that we see how captured by money and power the pen can be, and free it, ourselves.   p/s Sorry that I did not write you back with proper gratitude, sooner. I have been away from postpoems far more often - and longer - than I would like. Hoping to change that this coming season.   All the best to you

Deux ans disparu  (two years: Deux ans disparu  (two years passed) my favorite part

Thank you!   Lori: Thank you!   Lori

It wasn't the main intent but: It wasn't the main intent but it wasn't a banned image-movement either. A much welcome reading, nevertheless

Clearly the mark of a genius.: Clearly the mark of a genius. It's absolutely exceptional, the awkward first stanza, and then the scene conjures beautifully with just a couple perfectly placed words, and the last line that commands a full swing bringing you back up to the title for a sort of ouroboros epiphany!!! Unbelievable, dude, and it was certainly a honor to have had the privilege to witness.

Ahhh, there's that flawless: Ahhh, there's that flawless dialogue. You hit all the right notes. The hammer swings, the brass bell dings! Hi-score! You know it's good when you couldn't delineate if it's fact or fiction. The grace of language blends the mundance with your signature sparkle, sister. Yup.

That amazing figurine avatar: That amazing figurine avatar is what drew me to view your page, and let me tell you what follows does not disappoint!! Congatulations, you gained a fan today.