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caterpillar returning
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reworked vintage “caterpillar returning”
transformations:
spinning weaving coccooning~ enshroudedness
spelunking abseiling rappeling~ abscondedness
protruding eschewing amnesic~ metamorphoses
crawling once
fluttering now
prismatic radiance~ duckling's cousin
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duckling's cousin...
duckling's cousin... interesting... i suppose they do both flutter, one maybe more so than the other... but ducks flounder not just in flight but say as they may be bathing in a lake... lots of big words followed with that last line of sudden punching whimsy to seal the deal...
articulate.my.desire
vorp.structure.stagnate
doesnt.matter.haha
Perhaps
This was too densely compressed, the Swan being likened to a (far) cousin of the duck genus and a caterpillar chrysalis in one go, recalling the tale of the "ugly duckling"
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