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Parking meter
A fold of paper
left hand then
right passed side
to side
Rust roof painted white
Old ranger parked in naked moon
Plumeria is all I can see
Just hand the note to me
A fold of paper
left hand then
right passed side
to side
Rust roof painted white
Old ranger parked in naked moon
Plumeria is all I can see
Just hand the note to me
Clearly the mark of a genius.
Clearly the mark of a genius. It's absolutely exceptional, the awkward first stanza, and then the scene conjures beautifully with just a couple perfectly placed words, and the last line that commands a full swing bringing you back up to the title for a sort of ouroboros epiphany!!! Unbelievable, dude, and it was certainly a honor to have had the privilege to witness.
articulate.my.desire
vorp.structure.stagnate
doesnt.matter.haha