Bringing these threads of: Bringing these threads of revelation and understanding makes the sense and feel come to life, far too many do not do theology this way, probably the reason for there being few epiphanies and the weakness of spiritual conviction and the dearth of mountain-moving faith. And that without even mentioning superstition and syncretism. The salvific element is truly exclusively to the name above all names.
The short lines work very: The short lines work very well, and encourage your specialized knack for like ambient abstraction to really cut through, forcing the audience to connect the dots, pondering.
Your comment is so deep that: Your comment is so deep that I am not sure how to respond, except to say thank you. And I agree, poetry especially is all about a soul acknolwedging existence. (And that phrase, in your comment, is one of the most brilliant metaphysical statements that I have ever read.)
Once upon a time... : I was the latter, though I took a vow of poverty rather than take from my fellows... now by some miracle I've become the former, though in no position of influence at all... best pray that I never am cuz in my mind, from what I've witnessed in just the last 3 hours alone, we are all in bigsh*t trouble... omkalima omkalima omkalima...
Thanks kindly, that makes me: Thanks kindly, that makes me glad to hear; short of a time machine and teleportation device, poetry is the most accessible thing at the moment.
Of the government and it's: Of the government and it's ruling class, always take at least as much, if not more, than you provide. Emotionally, economically, etc.
Of the family, friends, community around you and struggling people of the world, always give more than you take. Emotionally, economically, etc..
This is how we rebalance an imbalanced world.