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Pungus commented on: Adrenochrome! Thank the Dumpster Gods! by Pungus 11 weeks 2 days ago
Suave and succinct, a comment: Suave and succinct, a comment that feels like those appraisals of review one finds on book covers.
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Pungus commented on: Adrenochrome! Thank the Dumpster Gods! by Pungus 11 weeks 2 days ago
Hearing this compliment from: Hearing this compliment from you produced such an effect on me that I immediately was inspired to write the poem 'what's the moon do?' a tad veering, but I hope it lives up to that anticipation you mentioned. And again, I can't put into words how sweet it feels to see you here, my friend.
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C03ru135c3n7 commented on: Adrenochrome! Thank the Dumpster Gods! by Pungus 11 weeks 2 days ago
That final phrase, streets of: That final phrase, streets of nocturne, is BEAUTIFUL (and I DO mean, **BEAUTIFUL**), and suggests a mythical, and maybe even epic, place just ripening in anticipation of some poems about it.
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redbrick commented on: Adrenochrome! Thank the Dumpster Gods! by Pungus 11 weeks 3 days ago
Raw, unfiltered and dark,: Raw, unfiltered and dark, creating a compelling narrative that resonates with the realities of survival and the human condition.
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redbrick commented on: cowardly survivor by redbrick 11 weeks 3 days ago
Ah, the words of one that: Ah, the words of one that gets it! We are creatures of self-contradiction at typical times, I could only imagine how we'd fare in the better times! Thanks my friend for your much valued thoughts
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redbrick commented on: cowardly survivor by redbrick 11 weeks 3 days ago
Ah, the words of one that: Ah, the words of one that gets it! We are creatures of self-contradiction at typical times, I could only imagine how we'd fare in the better times! Thanks my friend for your valued thoughts
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Pungus commented on: cowardly survivor by redbrick 11 weeks 3 days ago
LOVE the duality this poem: LOVE the duality this poem presents, this honest and stark contradiction in a belief system of what works, going forward. Though you could say it is brave to be constantly facing your trauma.
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ramonathompsont commented on: it happened quick by Pungus 11 weeks 4 days ago
strong words with a powerful: strong words with a powerful message. you have talent
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ramonathompsont commented on: A son’s journey-The Road that never ends by orishaman 11 weeks 4 days ago
this put tears in my eyes. so: this put tears in my eyes. so moving!
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J4nu4r14n commented on: Golden Ratio's Grace by cynosure 11 weeks 5 days ago
This is such a fantastic poem: This is such a fantastic poem that only Patricia's comment can explicate it as it deserves.
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patriciajj commented on: Golden Ratio's Grace by cynosure 11 weeks 5 days ago
Sorry I haven't been around: Sorry I haven't been around much, but things have been hectic and demanding for me lately.    The brilliance of this poem is its illustrative structure and symmetry that gracefully captures the fascinating metaphysics hidden in plain sight everywhere in nature. The cadence is captivating and the theme something that has intrigued me for some time.   It takes extraordinary creativity and insight to not only explore, but to breathe poetic life into a subject where science and spirit intersect and perhaps even give us a glimpse of the mathematical process of creation itself.    A sublime, mind-bending and immersive experience. 
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cynosure commented on: + 8TH POEMS: At My Father, Lloyd's Tombstone, January 21st, 2025, His Ninety-Ninth Birthday [2nd Repost] by S74rw4rd13d 11 weeks 5 days ago
It's good to see you: Hello Patricia, it's good to see you're still active. It has been a while since I last saw you. 
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redbrick commented on: anomalous fog by Pungus 11 weeks 6 days ago
It will come back around...: It will come back around... it's something built into you. And I find inbuilt things are hard to control or manage even. Hope you keep your account open for when the writing "spell" resurfaces however far or near in between.
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Pungus commented on: anomalous fog by Pungus 11 weeks 6 days ago
Honestly I'm pretty much: Honestly I'm pretty much falling out of writing- don't have nearly the passion I once did- but thank you for your comment, definitely nice to see you're still pumping
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redbrick commented on: anomalous fog by Pungus 12 weeks 9 hours ago
The world that we live in: The world that we live in allows for the commodification of existence. The imagery of being fossilized and studied, to me, speaks to the enduring nature of our impact, even when lost to the mists of time. First read of the year on your page... it may be an important segment of your writing journey!
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