castle keep

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I was but a boy

circling my haunt

excited by glints

sparking my periphery

striking from sandy

footprints in the sun

cascading upwards

as I diminish within

its helical embrace

offering prismatic

sublimating visions

refracting my parts

scattering my trove

of gathered truths

waiting for the tide

to repossess my keep.




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The short lines work very

The short lines work very well, and encourage your specialized knack for like ambient abstraction to really cut through, forcing the audience to connect the dots, pondering.


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Have I finally neared home?

Have I finally neared home? Been around the world trying this and that! And I, I, I... I can't find my bae....(lol)


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