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Thank you for bringing both: Thank you for bringing both conviction and close reading here. I share your sense that homelessness in wealthy societies is less about resources than will, and your naming of hyper‑individualism as tyranny sharpens that truth. I’m glad that the hinge between physical and emotional exile spoke to you, that your pause on “Marble floors echo louder than alleys” felt like the loop closing. I am so grateful to you.  

Glad to have brought some: Glad to have brought some enjoyment and interaction. We would have been different poets or worked at it in other ways had there been no social media aspect to this exercise. 

I was hoping you would relish: I was hoping you would relish “la petite répartie.” 

Your verbal skill is well: Your verbal skill is well displayed in this powerful poem.

  A beautiful devotional:   A beautiful devotional response,  It is moving how you weave Tyutchev’s contemplative spirit into a deeply personal affirmation of faith. The image of resting at Christ’s feet, paired with the scriptural echoes of Galatians and 1 John, gives the poem both intimacy and timelessness. It reads like a prayer as much as a poem.

Thanks!:

Thanks!: Thanks!