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Intimacy (In This Moment)
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To My Wife Lost in this moment
The warmth of our bodies make us sweat
The stiffness from what we have just accomplished
You and I,
A miracle
Your breath invites me in
Into your heart
Into your mind
Into your very soul
As our bodies mesh into one
As our souls embrace each other
You sigh as I touch you
Ectasy as we unite
Swirlling vortex of pleasure
Both of us lose sight
As life is created within you
As death is passed on through me
A miracle is created
A mirror of that moment
When we came together as one
beautiful
dedication love poem!
CKK
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Revisiting this, the
Revisiting this, the experience is just as fresh, just as profound
Starward
I'm Glad
That you still enjoy it. Words live outside of time,
and thereby do not age as we do; they are immortal.
Thank you for revisiting.
Post Tenebras Spero Lucem
This is one of the most
This is one of the most profound love poems I have ever read, especially the lines
As life is created within you
As death is passed on through me
I have been reading poetry for forty three years now, and I have found very few love poems with this kind of spiritual depth.
Starward
Gratitude
Thank you. I appreciate your feedback. Your poems are very spiritually in-depth as well, although for myself I find that the style of my writing undulates with my own spiritual "highs" and "lows," peaks and troughs as C.S. Lewis wrote in the Screwtape Letters. Thank you for your time!
Post Tenebras Spero Lucem
Revisiting again, and I think
Revisiting again, and I think the poem is even more beautiful than on my first reading.
Starward