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A wave and an ocean.

A ship has sailed
perhaps it was not for me
I let go of the ports rail
and fall beneath the sea.

This is how it is;
nothing to grip
just drifting
weightless
I open my eyes
the blue is overwhelming
I continue to observe
learning curves
reside nowhere down here.

A consistent deep ambiance of monotone pressure
hits me
attempting to intrude.
Is that who I am;
I observe the blue
no
THAT is you.

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Feedback always appreciated. I wrote this while chilling in my room lisnin' to tunes.

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©4 March 2012 - 10:00pm — Anonymous
11 March 2012 - 6:41am — indigo_kid007
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How do you do that!?

I adore how you paint pictures with you simplicity. You're so original.

EricaMay

26 April 2013 - 12:27pm — Mardigan (not verified)
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Thank you, Indigo, very kind

Thank you, Indigo, very kind of you to say. 

9 March 2012 - 11:46pm — SSmoothie
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Ha ha I really like this one,

Ha ha I really like this one, it captured me well done nice chilling' ;)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

10 March 2012 - 3:34am — Mardigan (not verified)
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Hey Smoothie, appreciate the

Hey Smoothie, appreciate the comment, I am glad that it reached ya.
-Matt