Guess What I See?

I look around and guess what I see?
I see bitches and hoes but none of them are me.
I see people who smoke and drink who think they're so cool
But for me to be cool I just need a book and go to school
People sit and talk about me like I'm a lame.
But Hey at least I'm not the one who thinks life is a game.
All I do is write and express things that people don't see
While people express themselves through negativity
See what people don't see is that they are the lames
The lames who smoke weed and drink vodka
The ones who think they're so cool
While causing themselves to get cancer and die
See what I see are people who are so insecure about themselves
So insecure they talk all about others who felt great about themselves
They put people down just to feel better about themselves.
But I cant say anything about them.
They're actions speaks louder than they're words.
So I look around me and guess what I see?
I see people who are bitches and hoes
Gangbangers and gangsters
People who drink and smoke weed
But Hey at least not one of them is me.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

All about people who smoke and drink who think theyre so cool but aren't bcuz they're only killing themselves. People who talk about other people who do better than they are only bcuz they feel like sh*t

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MyinsecureSelf's picture

I don't want to be

I don't want to be hypocritical with my comment, so i admit I'm guilty of most of the stuff you wrote about..but i don't really do it for recreational reasons or to feel "kool"..its for other reasons.
But ANYWAYS this is so true, you basically got the typical teenager figured out
Great Poem!

daniieGigglez's picture

thank u. it wasnt meant for

thank u.
it wasnt meant for any one person but ppl in general. its just how i saw 90% of my school.

joshomac's picture

Shits so true dude, pretty

Shits so true dude, pretty much got people nowadays in a nutshell.


Beyond the scope of light,

Beyond the reach of dark..

daniieGigglez's picture

i know an ppl think theyre so

i know an ppl think theyre so cool doing it. like really all they are doin is killin themselves which is not true -____-

joshomac's picture

Kick ass dude!

Kick ass dude!


Beyond the scope of light,

Beyond the reach of dark..

daniieGigglez's picture

thank you(:

thank you(: