We live in cages
for so long
without realizing the key
is on our hands
Why do we stand for such insanity?
Was it the way we were raised?
Were we led astray?
because the key is our hands and most people don't want to be responsible for unlocking life, what if they don't like what's in the safe? what if the cops come? what if the safe is empty...what if if if if if...you never live?
I like this poem. I read ur other ones and u show a lot of potential. This poem proves it. So don't give into critics, ever. Btw welcome to postpoems :D
because the key is our hands
because the key is our hands and most people don't want to be responsible for unlocking life, what if they don't like what's in the safe? what if the cops come? what if the safe is empty...what if if if if if...you never live?
I think I need sleep judging by that comment ;)
Much Love
Ashley
I like this poem. I read ur
I like this poem. I read ur other ones and u show a lot of potential. This poem proves it. So don't give into critics, ever. Btw welcome to postpoems :D
Thanks John, I appreciate
Thanks John, I appreciate that.
Yup :D
Yup :D
Nice Write
Looking forward to your comments on PP poets ~~A~~