The short lines work very: The short lines work very well, and encourage your specialized knack for like ambient abstraction to really cut through, forcing the audience to connect the dots, pondering.
Your comment is so deep that: Your comment is so deep that I am not sure how to respond, except to say thank you. And I agree, poetry especially is all about a soul acknolwedging existence. (And that phrase, in your comment, is one of the most brilliant metaphysical statements that I have ever read.)
Thanks kindly, that makes me: Thanks kindly, that makes me glad to hear; short of a time machine and teleportation device, poetry is the most accessible thing at the moment.
i guess as precursors to or: i guess as precursors to or prototypical platforms of AI technology they will eventually will have been superseded by newer generations unless they themselves get upgraded. something like Emma Thompson in "The Mitchells Versus the Machines."
There once was a man..: There once was a man named Gus
Who'd always make a fuss
Never said 'Hiyah, Bird!'
That would be absurd
As Snuffalopagus? No, as Enough? Ha! Can't top Gus!
Thanks for posting!