"If a man cheats because
he: "If a man cheats because
he was attracted to another,that's infidelity.
If a woman falls for a jerkbecause he whispered sweet nothings,than she's a fool." So true. Good writing and truthful.
This is an excellent: This is an excellent testimony poem, and presents a significant, but stilll-open, question. I think we stray from the narrow path because we are broken, flawed, and fallible; but the blessing of this is that we remain constantly aware of our need for a Savior, for Jesus. The Gospels show us he chose some, just like us, to be His Apostles and evangelists. Our problem, in Western Christianity, is that we have allowed poor and obscure theology, to focus on primarily on God's wrath rathern than His Love. The Eastern Church continues to emphasize His Love---they call Him, the Lover of Humankind. We, in the West, use John 3:16---overuse it, actually---as a text for evangelical effort, emphasizing far too much on the belief aspect that it mentions, and not on God's Love that it describes. As long as I believe in my Savior, in the Salvation He has made available, and in my own need for such Salvation, I have Salvation. It is those who have become smug in the Faith, or in their lack of Faith, who have, of their own choice, removed themselves from the haven and shelter of Salvation.
Thank you for writing this amazing poem. It will speak, and speak convincingly, to many souls.
I really, really like the: I really, really like the testimony that this poem presents. Its lines are energetic, and their brevity keeps the poem moving until it concludes. The fourteenth and seventeenth lines do not work, at least for me; as they seem to reduce God to a spy, which is a pejorative term: His knowledge of our lives is not obtained by "spying" upon them.
Other than that, I applaud the Faith that made this poem possible; and, coming ouf of the writer's block you mentioned, it is mighty impressive!!!
My guess would be the ancient: My guess would be the ancient Greeks who first used the term. The Greek language did not originally have a lower case, so they must have capitalized everything. I capitalize it out of respect for the Art and those who serve it.
You, SSmoothie and Patricia: You, SSmoothie and Patricia, yalls comments are equaled, and so I respond with one comment a-tall, beauties and queens, of what it means to be, an earthling on eternity.