A Mattress Wrapped in Plastic

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Tributes to Lovers

Let me set the scene:
it was midnight
on a balmy June evening,
you agreed to meet me
at my new place.


I was still waiting for
my bedroom furniture,
but I did have a mattress
wrapped in plastic.


That's where it happened,
that's when I gave myself to you
after months of flirting
and nursing a heart
broken by another.


I regret not thinking it over,
not waiting until the sun rose
and my mind was clearer.


I made the decision
with loneliness being
the primary reason.


I was crumbling under
rejection and responsibility,
and then I let your body
further smother me.


I just didn't think
I would still be choking
on my mistake
all these years later.

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Craign1979's picture

From romantic to

From romantic to heartbreaking in a moment. Excellent writing. 

Teytonon's picture

Well done! Your title brings..

Well done! Your title brings to mind the man who walked into the psychiatrists 

office wearing nothing but clear plastic wrap. Upon seeing him, the psychiatrist uttered  'Clearly, I can see your nuts'. Keep up the good work.

  

ramonathompsont's picture

lol cute 

lol cute in reply to comment left about the guy in the doc's office