Thanks!: Hi redbrick! Thanks for the reply and for your time. I've read some of your stuff and replied to some too. You are indeed a weaver of words!
sTaY rEaL,
Karl
Hmmm? I get Shakespearea: Hmmm? I get Shakespearea vibes.... Very easy to punch CTRL/ALT/DEL, yes. Perhaps a little to easy? Very ... laconic imagery!
With a bare bodkin? who would fardels bear,
To grunt and sweat under a weary life,
But that the dread of something after death,
The undiscover'd country from whose bourn
No traveller returns, puzzles the will
And makes us rather bear those ills we have
Than fly to others that we know not of?
(Hamlet Act 3, Scene 1)
Yep. Is it working? Using a: Yep. Is it working? Using a new world order different but the same as the old new world order. A league of extraordinary gentlemen... hint hint...
Almost there... such great: Almost there... such great imagery and metaphor the structure begs for eleoqunce but, it gets caught on emotionalism and luckily it wins out. Something reL special here .