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redbrick commented on: totum factotum by redbrick 1 year 20 weeks ago
cheers : cheers
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SSmoothie commented on: The essence in 4 lines by SSmoothie 1 year 20 weeks ago
Wow what a beautiful and: Wow what a beautiful and talented response laid perfectly poetically with resounding profundity! Many thanks blessings ss
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Pungus commented on: Mercator by redbrick 1 year 20 weeks ago
More goosebumbs: More goosebumbs
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Pungus commented on: totum factotum by redbrick 1 year 20 weeks ago
Goosebumps: Goosebumps
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Teytonon commented on: The 40th Anniversary Of Chef Boyardee's Death by randyjohnson 1 year 20 weeks ago
Thanks for bringing attention..: Thanks for bringing attention to this sad occasion  We shouldn't be mourning, should have a celebration  We should celebrate his life, the rises and the falls Many are overcome with grief, even the meat bawls  We must realize, when you're talking chefs, he's the master Chef Boyardee, dead 40 years, that's all in the pasta He worked to attain his dream, never gave up on his plan To sell, God rest his soul, spaghetti & meatballs in a can    
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rachel commented on: The Fire-Mage by rachel 1 year 20 weeks ago
Thank you! My own: Thank you! My own interpretation of the character and his story is twofold: I think he either survived the apocalypse by shielding himself with his fire magic, or else he inadvertently caused it-- either way, he is alone and filled with terror and regret. I suppose, though, there is a third interpretation, too: that his baptism by fire is what made him a fire mage. In any case, he is a wretched creature-- my favorite kind!
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redbrick commented on: Maginot by redbrick 1 year 20 weeks ago
Probably, either as a ruin or: Probably, either as a ruin or a historical park. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Untitled 21 by rachel 1 year 20 weeks ago
Excellent, and very poetic,: Excellent, and very poetic, analysis!
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Teytonon commented on: Maginot by redbrick 1 year 20 weeks ago
This is as good..: This is as good as I've seen of your work, which is always top level. That picture is fascinating. Upon first glance, I thought it was an ad for a new condo in Brooklyn. Does it still exist?
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uninvited_1 commented on: crazy world by uninvited_1 1 year 20 weeks ago
I love and  appreciate your: I love and  appreciate your feedback on this one. Such a great breakdown through another reader's eyes. I'm so glad you took the the not only to read this, but to give such a well versed response. It truly means a lot. Thank you redbrick
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uninvited_1 commented on: Anthem of the Broken Hearted by uninvited_1 1 year 20 weeks ago
Heck yeah! : Heck yeah!
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redbrick commented on: Fred & Mildred - a misunderstanding by Teytonon 1 year 20 weeks ago
Some Fred needs a hearing aid: Some Fred needs a hearing aid and take his mind out of the gutter it seems, a truly fun read. But there is also some underlying truths running beneath the surface there, or so it would seem.
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redbrick commented on: Offset by grahf 1 year 20 weeks ago
Your poem: Your poem looks to delve into the emotional turmoil caused by a significant other's presence, capturing the loss of routine and the resulting inner conflict. The narrator longs for the tranquility of their absence, even at the cost of feeling futile. The vivid imagery and melancholic tone underscore the struggle to adapt and the yearning for peace. This is a powerful synthesis that reaches out to the reader and to the Universe. Or then again, it could be something else entirely 
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redbrick commented on: PEPPER GLASS DREAMS by georgeschaefer 1 year 20 weeks ago
Spirals! They were like the: Spirals! They were like the F-18s of the day
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georgeschaefer commented on: PEPPER GLASS DREAMS by georgeschaefer 1 year 20 weeks ago
thank you for reading and: thank you for reading and commenting.  I found this in an old spiral notebook.  I think I wrote it in the early 90's.
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