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karlmcallister commented on: time’s no friend by redbrick 49 weeks 1 day ago
Touché!   but always at my: Touché!   but always at my back I hear Time's winged chariot drawing near... (From "To his coy mistress" by Andrew Marvell)
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karlmcallister commented on: tHe CoInCiDeNcE oF oPpOsItEs by karlmcallister 49 weeks 1 day ago
Thanks!: Hi redbrick! Thanks for the reply and for your time. I've read some of your stuff and replied to some too. You are indeed a weaver of words!   sTaY rEaL,   Karl
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redbrick commented on: The Triangle by karlmcallister 49 weeks 1 day ago
Vertigo is no friend of hours: Vertigo is no friend of hours (sic) but time will tell.
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redbrick commented on: time’s no friend by redbrick 49 weeks 1 day ago
Indeed! And oftentimes a: Indeed! And oftentimes a useful alliance forged at others a dilemma of deadline or expiry proportions
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karlmcallister commented on: afterparty by redbrick 49 weeks 1 day ago
Nice!: Wow! What striking imagery, vulnerabke, sore and yet hopeful and full of possibility.    Thanks!
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karlmcallister commented on: CTRL + ALT + DLT by redbrick 49 weeks 1 day ago
Hmmm? I get Shakespearea: Hmmm? I get Shakespearea vibes....  Very easy to punch CTRL/ALT/DEL, yes.  Perhaps a little to easy?  Very ... laconic imagery!    With a bare bodkin? who would fardels bear,   To grunt and sweat under a weary life,   But that the dread of something after death,   The undiscover'd country from whose bourn   No traveller returns, puzzles the will   And makes us rather bear those ills we have   Than fly to others that we know not of? (Hamlet Act 3, Scene 1)
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karlmcallister commented on: time’s no friend by redbrick 49 weeks 1 day ago
no friend?: Ah, but time is literally all we have...
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redbrick commented on: Its never worse by SSmoothie 49 weeks 1 day ago
How the mind works or: How the mind works or doesn't; such a perplexity
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redbrick commented on: pulse by redbrick 49 weeks 1 day ago
Thanks kindly! Good to hear: Thanks kindly! Good to hear from you again
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SSmoothie commented on: Untethered Night by patriciajj 49 weeks 1 day ago
Perfect. Every word.: Perfect. Every word. Brilliant. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: How a bill becomes law: 2025 by Teytonon 49 weeks 1 day ago
Yep. Is it working? Using a: Yep. Is it working? Using a new world order different but the same as the old new world order. A league of extraordinary gentlemen... hint hint...
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SSmoothie commented on: Yes, today by Teytonon 49 weeks 1 day ago
Yep. Good for flo, good for: Yep. Good for flo, good for you both can find something new. Cute poem. 
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SSmoothie commented on: Fading We by deepblue 49 weeks 1 day ago
Almost there... such great: Almost there... such great imagery and metaphor the structure begs for eleoqunce but, it gets caught on emotionalism and luckily it wins out. Something reL special here .
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SSmoothie commented on: pulse by redbrick 49 weeks 1 day ago
Beautifully expressed l, and: Beautifully expressed l, and maybe one day well green a parking lot and put up a paradise. Aussie? Oi oi oi... nice one. 
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