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redbrick commented on: indignity by orangejumpsuit 1 year 4 weeks ago
The intersections of science,: The intersections of science, culture, and commerce are often absurd and the cyclical nature of perspective brings a sense of cosmic irony and futility. This lively poem confronts the uncomfortable truths about existence, society, and the passage of time.
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redbrick commented on: Edgar Allan: Ravenous Poe by redbrick 1 year 4 weeks ago
That suggestion about its: That suggestion about its reading sends bristles up the spine! A graveyard reading, curious and intriguing
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Bellalibra commented on: Tú eres yo, y Yo soy tu! by orishaman 1 year 4 weeks ago
Una feminidad divina sigue: Una feminidad divina sigue siendo un faro para su contraparte masculina divina.   Sin embargo, ellos residen en reinos opuestos ... El universo canta
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J-9thxciv commented on: Edgar Allan: Ravenous Poe by redbrick 1 year 4 weeks ago
This is much more than a poem: This is much more than a poem about E.A. Poe.  I am no expert on Poe, but I believe this is a textbook perfect introduction to his personality.  This poem should be read aloud at his tomb.  In my opinion as a poet, this poem is superior to Mallarme's poem on Poe.
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J-9thxciv commented on: Hyena Harris for Prez? by ChryWizard 1 year 4 weeks ago
I see . . . like if I: I see . . . like if I labeled, oh maybe, some orange-haired pimp in a business suit as, say, a convicted insurrectionist.
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J-9thxciv commented on: + 8TH POEMS: To All Who Read This, An Apology by S74rw4rd-13d 1 year 4 weeks ago
Thanks, and I do owe you a: Thanks, and I do owe you a reply to your PM.
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Craign1979 commented on: + 8TH POEMS: To All Who Read This, An Apology by S74rw4rd-13d 1 year 4 weeks ago
No apologies are necessary as: No apologies are necessary as long as you find your way
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redbrick commented on: Irreconcilable Differences by metaphorist 1 year 5 weeks ago
Neither do I! In most places: Neither do I! In most places it also seems legal to undergo prenuptial counselling and induction sessions which should rule out those differences even before enter into that legally binding contract. And then you have the visa-hunting sort of arrangement. It's a wonder how people of all self-identities are still wanting in. A bitter reality and puzzlement indeed
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J-9thxciv commented on: With Christians In Christ Together by S74rw4rd-13d 1 year 5 weeks ago
I am so sorry that I failed: I am so sorry that I failed to reply.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Christmas Angel by ramonathompsont 1 year 5 weeks ago
thank you so much  : thank you so much  
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ramonathompsont commented on: Give by ramonathompsont 1 year 5 weeks ago
thank you very much: thank you very much
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ChryWizard commented on: Hyena Harris for Prez? by ChryWizard 1 year 5 weeks ago
There is no attack...: The term " Hynea " is reference to her annoying cackle like a excited Hynea... I could " Label " someone, with a better term to describe a  Political Pawn then Hynea!
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Teytonon commented on: Allegory? No, Alighieri by Teytonon 1 year 5 weeks ago
Thank you for your comment..: Thank you for your comment. Upon reflection, you're absolutely right. I've changed the final lines as you see. Dante deserves the credit, don't he? Hope you are feeling well these days. You're a stalwart on this site and hope you remain one for a long time. Take care.
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justme4him commented on: Unfaith by justme4him 1 year 5 weeks ago
you are right.: I am wrong. 
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S74RW4RD commented on: Allegory? No, Alighieri by Teytonon 1 year 5 weeks ago
I like this, but I think the: I like this, but I think the last line could be revised to be more respectfu of Dante---that great tower of Poetry beside whom we in this era are puny indeed.
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