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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: homestead nights by redbrick 46 weeks 5 days ago
Given the circumstances and: Given the circumstances and vicinity of my adolesence, this poem touches me more than just the literary way; and more profoundly than most poems can.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: We Can All Be Better by ramonathompsont 46 weeks 5 days ago
This is a very profound poem.: This is a very profound poem.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: over-shoulder weather by redbrick 46 weeks 5 days ago
I have been reading Poetry: I have been reading Poetry for over half a century.  Yet, when I read yours, I feel like I am just starting out because your verbal skill is so invocative, evocative, and provocative.  Your Poems function at what might be called the very frontier of the English language where power and strength of words is renewed beyond the mundane ways in which most of us use them.  Reading your words is very much like a mystical experience; reading your words is always, and ever shall be, a Privilege.  
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Waves commented on: The second time around by Angelhavingfun 46 weeks 6 days ago
"The heart is deceitful above: "The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately sick; who can understand it    
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redbrick commented on: homestead nights by redbrick 47 weeks 1 day ago
Your applause rides with me;: Your applause rides with me; tucked in the carriage light, steady between city and field -yet your voice is paramountly welcome each step along the way.
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redbrick commented on: at the corner by redbrick 47 weeks 1 day ago
And there we are, part of the: And there we are, part of the fog’s own handwriting — hair like a weather front, clothes like a hearth, steady enough to let the street’s two currents braid themselves without our hands on the rope.        
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Pungus commented on: Who is she? by Teytonon 47 weeks 1 day ago
Well, you got a face though: Well, you got a face though
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Teytonon commented on: Who is she? by Teytonon 47 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you very much for the compliment..: Thank you very much for the compliment. Me, performing? I don't think so. I'm more comfortable behind the scenes. Thanks again for your comment. Take care,
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redbrick commented on: life-arc by redbrick 47 weeks 1 day ago
  Reading Note — The:   Reading Note — The Loop These two pieces are not fixed in sequence.Begin in the city and ride out to the farm,or start under the wide‑skied dark and follow the tracks into bricklight.The hinge is your turning point — a platform where both airs meet.Read them forward, read them in reverse,and you’ll find the same current running through:home is not one place, but the motion between.       .    
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Pungus commented on: homestead nights by redbrick 47 weeks 1 day ago
I doubt if I can keep up: I doubt if I can keep up commenting, but you will always hold my applause!
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Pungus commented on: Who is she? by Teytonon 47 weeks 1 day ago
Bravo: You deserve your own stand up special: easy enough to write and read, I reckon; take the next step and try performing.
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redbrick commented on: townhouse days by redbrick 47 weeks 1 day ago
Ha! And if fortune tips her: Ha! And if fortune tips her hat just so, I’ll have that crimson cover tucked under my arm before the ink’s even dry... brighter than a brass band at noon and twice as hard to miss. A proper bell‑ringer, you’ll hear it clear down the block.
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Pungus commented on: at the corner by redbrick 47 weeks 1 day ago
unbiased coherence, the: unbiased coherence, the paramount goal, as blessings of poetry pass me by, sullen stripey hair, unkempt, calm and clad in cozy clothes
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redbrick commented on: the old home by redbrick 47 weeks 1 day ago
...lovely to touch, but the: ...lovely to touch, but the real river’s under our feet, and it’s already moving us forward! 
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Pungus commented on: the old home by redbrick 47 weeks 2 days ago
ouija touché: ouija touché postcard from the seine
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