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patriciajj commented on: Footnote: Three Tanka [ /;\ ] by J4nu4r14n 2 years 11 weeks* ago* These three tanka could each: These three tanka could each stand alone, yet they fuse seamlessly together into a garden of physical, spiritual and earthly delights. Nature is the thread that weaves sensuality and magnificence together. For instance, the cherry blossoms give a foretaste of a similar softness of the socks and their nuanced seduction; warm rain, a thin veil of moisture, awakens something primal in the observer in the second poem; the clouds and sun are vessels for the fully-blossomed love that drenches all creation in the third, forming a resplendent finale to the collection. An alluring trio. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: The Death of Queen Elizabeth II by randyjohnson 2 years 11 weeks* ago* I was wondering if and when: I was wondering if and when this would post, and it bears your inimitable signature style. [ go to comment ]
georgeschaefer commented on: NO REAL POET by georgeschaefer 2 years 11 weeks* ago* we continue chasing the: we continue chasing the dragon known as the promise of youth [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Silver hooks by Pungus 2 years 11 weeks* ago* You set a sumptuous and: You set a sumptuous and intriguing stage. I would love to see where this goes! Something wonderful is certainly waiting to happen behind those "silken tapestry curtains" amid the "calm rhythmic clacking" in this mysterious place. Great possibilities! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Oblivious to Insult by lyrycsyntyme 2 years 11 weeks* ago* So clever! I adore the way: So clever! I adore the way you illustrated how much we "furless primates" can learn from these regal beings. A charming and very valuable life lesson. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Hansel by lyrycsyntyme 2 years 11 weeks* ago* Mysteriously dark. I had a: Mysteriously dark. I had a rather random thought of the two visiting a tanning salon. But this is far too graphic about incineration and cremation. And due deference is given to the witch and her malevolence, no flippancy there either. I can see a Pixar short as well in my mind's filming eye. Thanks for sharing. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Oblivious to Insult by lyrycsyntyme 2 years 11 weeks* ago* Felines are such mysterious: Felines are such mysterious creatures whose adorability is of another order. Thanks for sharing! [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Drowning by catclo15 2 years 11 weeks* ago* When hands don't reach out,: When hands don't reach out, be your own savior. You'll escape the water. Someone will be waiting with a towel. All the best. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: What you left me when you left me behind by ewbonitz 2 years 11 weeks* ago* I feel it, and I'm sorry: Feelings of a large room, and a heavy vacuum pushing across the expansive floor. Not a small person in your suffering, though. It's not possible to avoid filling the void with sadness and mourning, even if the sun unsympathetically carries on. The days must be counted, I suppose, till the next phase of life begins. All the best to you. This was really beautiful, no matter how sad. You do love justice. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: QE2 by Teytonon 2 years 11 weeks* ago* Forgive me, but, ding dong,: Forgive me, but, ding dong, the witch is dead. People who make their life upon claims that their bloodline allows them to drink off the backs of the masses are the truest of Welfare Queens. I wish not death upon anyone, but hopefully she gets a second chance to do it right (perhaps in pauper's clothes, next time). That all said, a nice rhyming scheme, sir, poetically. And your solid use of allusion at the start cued me into what event had transpired, even though I haven't watched, listened to or read the news in about 3 months. Skillful penning! [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: ONE LESS CHORE by georgeschaefer 2 years 11 weeks* ago* Just make sure to lock the: Just make sure to lock the door thereafter, lest the trash be dragged back in by the rats : ) [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: ode to wright by redbrick 2 years 11 weeks* ago* Thank you.: Thank you. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: ode to wright by redbrick 2 years 11 weeks* ago* Excellent!!!!!: Excellent!!!!! [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: NO REAL POET by georgeschaefer 2 years 11 weeks* ago* Neither should we let go.: Neither should we let go. Dreams that are birthed in the innocence of youth are the ones that seem to last a lifetime. Often they guide us in our days. Thanks for sharing. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: MAchine by captain 2 years 11 weeks* ago* Going on a dozen years ago,: Going on a dozen years ago, surely there is much more of this where it came from. Hope the pen's up and about although there aren't any other posts since this. [ go to comment ]