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Starward commented on: Eerie Limerick, A Random Improvisation by Starward-Led 3 years 37 weeks ago
Thank you, sir.: Thank you, sir.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Eerie Limerick, A Random Improvisation by Starward-Led 3 years 37 weeks ago
You're welcome, and I see. A: You're welcome, and I see. A way to pass and make good of the difficult time. Many a historical irishman would approve, I imagine.
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Starward commented on: Eerie Limerick, A Random Improvisation by Starward-Led 3 years 37 weeks ago
Thank you for the comment,: Thank you for the comment, and for the good wish.  No metaphorical connection, it really started as a response to the skewed rhythm of how I move on the walker.  From where I sit to the bathroom is kind of a long walk, and the return is usually the more difficult part of the round trip.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: CLUELESS by georgeschaefer 3 years 37 weeks ago
The world is always ending on: The world is always ending on T/v.   I suppose, now, that would also need to be said for social media.   Away from the satellites and fiber optic cables, the world's doing slightly better. Maybe only slightly, but, I suppose per your desires shared elsewhere, there's a little space to breathe ; )   This is one of yours that, to me, is a "classic". Maybe it's just the way it connects with me, having definitely walked a similar path in the last decade of my life, but I think it's more than that. It has your trademark meshing of personal observation, philosophy and time stamped contemporary culture sown together with dualing needles of self assuredness and self depracation - both feeling sincere.    Anyway, definitely thoroughly appreciated here.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: SOCIAL DISTANCING by georgeschaefer 3 years 37 weeks ago
It's a big world, my friend.: It's a big world, my friend. A big, big world.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Eerie Limerick, A Random Improvisation by Starward-Led 3 years 37 weeks ago
Eerie limerick, indeed. Any: Eerie limerick, indeed. Any metaphorical connection to your current condition? Wishing you all the best, as always.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: candy tears by tula 3 years 37 weeks ago
Fantastic piece of work: I love this poem, on the whole, but especially "i knew she was / the music / that she listens / to". It wrapped me in, and the next line "dreaming---" seams it all together.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: AN ARTIST IS CREATED by joy 3 years 37 weeks ago
Beautiful, endearing.   It: Beautiful, endearing.   It makes me think of the urge, one I know that many poets have felt, to be down on their older, "lesser" writings, and sometimes even disgard them. But, much like this drawing, even truly more primative writes of the poet were telling their own creation story ; )    Very much enjoyed this read and the reflection it brought about.
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Starward commented on: Glass Houses by tallsquirrelgirl 3 years 37 weeks ago
I applaud the coversational: I applaud the coversational tone with which this poem conveys its contents.  And that final stanza---that brilliant, triumphant, and very profound final stanza---releases a tremendous, and highly encouraging, power.
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georgeschaefer commented on: SOCIAL DISTANCING by georgeschaefer 3 years 37 weeks ago
Dance on ash piles and sing: Dance on ash piles and sing out loud.  Just let me have my space.  
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SSmoothie commented on: Dirty Footprints on your Heart, Again by Beavis 3 years 37 weeks ago
Wow, profound, and achingly: Wow, profound, and achingly beautiful! Hitting all the appropriate  beats. 
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SSmoothie commented on: I Knew this would be Hard by Beavis 3 years 37 weeks ago
The mind boggles! You've: The mind boggles! You've captured me!  Love it! Blessings ss
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SSmoothie commented on: My Blessing by frostbite 3 years 37 weeks ago
Aw so sweet! Love is: Aw so sweet! Love is something you work for the harder you work the deeper it gets. Not everyone has the the constitution compassion or the fortitude to make it last. Glad you found a source of great blessing and I hope she knows how lucky she is to have someone like you who sees it. Lovely words to melt hearts, frostbite? I don't see it. Maybe lovebite?
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williamjroneyiii commented on: I'm At Peace My Friend by williamjroneyiii 3 years 38 weeks ago
I'm At Peace My Friend: I believe all creatures have a souls, Horses, Dogs and Cats ect.   "Search And Seizure" My hands hurt, from doing the deed. Rolling joints and smoking weed.   My head is light, my eyes are red.     The cops show up to search the crib. They search the place from front and back.   The puppy lays on my black bag. They praised the dog for what she found! I had to turn the music down. William J. Roney III Copyright (C) 2019 The Dog is smart, she has a soul. The ribbon was blue, not solid gold. All creatures go to Heaven, that's my belief! My paper is ready to receive!   
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williamjroneyiii commented on: It Seems To Be Revised by williamjroneyiii 3 years 38 weeks ago
It Seems To Be: I know what you mean but looks are everthing, it seems to me!
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