Re: Your comment: I'd like to express my appreciation
For your hopefully helpful recommendation
It'll take a lot of guts
To eliminate all the butts
I come across while surfing the net
I've tried before, no success as yet
I hope you don't mind
But as they say
A good behind is hard to find
Wishing you a lovely day
Bottoms up!
Also messaged her a couple of: Also messaged her a couple of times last month, but have yet to hear any word. I hope one of us here will have some luck.
I take it that this poem is a: I take it that this poem is a commentary on people's inability to handle disagreement in a rational manner ,rather than your personal desire to be irrational.
A possible solution for any person who sees "a-holes" everywhere: If you don't want to see so many a-holes, shut off the screens and throw out the papers/magazines that like to show naked asses ; )
We all get mooned, sometimes, though, even when we don't want to.
One of the great flaws of: One of the great flaws of humanity, probably since two naked knuckleheads put on animal skins to be evicted from Eden, is the tendency to label---persons, ethnic groups, beliefs, and preferences. Yet the labeler gains nothing, and the labeled lose nothing, provided the label remains verbal and does not become an assault.
Wow, I never considered: Wow, I never considered before that there is a Muse for reading, as well as writing, Poetry. You have certainly improved upon the ancient Poets' concept of the Muses.
Thank you, Sir, and I agree: Thank you, Sir, and I agree exactly. Both Octavian and Herod were, basically, usurpers---both obsessed with retaining supreme power within their families, and both driven to express that power openly with enormous building projects that nearly bankrupted the economy of the Roman Empire. (The tax enrollment that brought Mary and Joseph to Bethlehem, where Jesus was subsequently born, was instituted by Octavian---who, by that time, was called Augustus---to refill the empty treasury that he had spent on architecture, both in Rome and through the provinces.) Octavian supposedly murdered Kaisarion (although he could never produce the body) because Kaisarion had the better claim to the Roman imperium; and, of course, Herod attemped to kill Christ, who had, has, and always will have the ultimate throne from which to reign and rule.
By way of historical coincidence, although the Apostle Saint Paul was the first Scriptural writer to call Christ the King Of Kings (in 1 Timothy 6:15), Kaisarion was given that same title (about a century prior to Paul's writings) by his stepfather, Mark Antony.
The horrors of succession and: The horrors of succession and inheritance. The transgressions are real all thoughout humanity's gory history and it will continue until reality of redemption is invoked for Salvation.
Thank you so much. This week: Thank you so much. This week has been very serene, as I look at, and plan for, a sequence of poems in a style that is new to my work, but seems to have been in the making since I first aspired to poetry decades ago. I think I still have a bit left in me.
I still believe it's amazing: I still believe it's amazing that you recognized a link most people would never have found. Ever. And yes, there is unspeakable solace in trusting in a Higher Power. Blessings.
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem.: Thank you for taking the time to read my poem.
I am very honoured that you view my writing to a standard worthy of such an Author as Robert Aickman.
This poem represents the daily struggles that I am sure a lot of people face as I do myself. We all have inner demons.
All of my writings come from first-hand experience, so once again thank you for taking the time to read them!
First, this is poem is full: First, this is poem is full of very profound wisdom. I wanted that statement to be the first part of my comment. It also creates a very eerie atmosphere.
As I read this, I was reminded of a rather lengthy short story (long but well worth the effort) by Robert Aickman, entitled "Pages From A Young Girl's Journal." In that story, Aickman---who at the date of its writing was a sixty year old dour Englishman, trained as an architect---imitates the voice of an adolescent girl of the early nineteenth century; who, in "her" journal gives us a vivid account of what it is like to give into the monstrous and demonic presence that pursues her. I mean this as a compliment to you, because Aickman, in my opinion, is the "gold standard" of eerie tales, and your poem certainly rises to that level, while also provided, as I said above, some very profound wisdom.