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Teytonon commented on: A-holes by Teytonon 2 years 10 weeks ago
Re: Your comment: I'd like to express my appreciation  For your hopefully helpful recommendation It'll take a lot of guts  To eliminate all the butts  I come across while surfing the net I've tried before, no success as yet I hope you don't mind But as they say  A good behind is hard to find Wishing you a lovely day Bottoms up!    
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Starward commented on: Where have you gone Allets? by Teytonon 2 years 10 weeks ago
I, too, sent her a message;: I, too, sent her a message; no reply, alas.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Where have you gone Allets? by Teytonon 2 years 10 weeks ago
Also messaged her a couple of: Also messaged her a couple of times last month, but have yet to hear any word. I hope one of us here will have some luck. 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: A-holes by Teytonon 2 years 10 weeks ago
I take it that this poem is a: I take it that this poem is a commentary on people's inability to handle disagreement in a rational manner ,rather than your personal desire to be irrational.    A possible solution for any person who sees "a-holes" everywhere: If you don't want to see so many a-holes, shut off the screens and throw out the papers/magazines that like to show naked asses ; )   We all get mooned, sometimes, though, even when we don't want to.    
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Strife by Bec.J 2 years 10 weeks ago
Graceful flow: A very poetic call to carry on through the greatest challenge we face - the troubled voice within ourselves.
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Starward commented on: A-holes by Teytonon 2 years 10 weeks ago
One of the great flaws of: One of the great flaws of humanity, probably since two naked knuckleheads put on animal skins to be evicted from Eden, is the tendency to label---persons, ethnic groups, beliefs, and preferences.  Yet the labeler gains nothing, and the labeled lose nothing, provided the label remains verbal and does not become an assault.  
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Starward commented on: re(ad)writing poetry by redbrick 2 years 10 weeks ago
Wow, I never considered: Wow, I never considered before that there is a Muse for reading, as well as writing, Poetry.  You have certainly improved upon the ancient Poets' concept of the Muses.
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Herod The So-Called Great, Frustrated by J4nu4r14n 2 years 10 weeks ago
Thank you, Sir, and I agree: Thank you, Sir, and I agree exactly.  Both Octavian and Herod were, basically, usurpers---both obsessed with retaining supreme power within their families, and both driven to express that power openly with enormous building projects that nearly bankrupted the economy of the Roman Empire.  (The tax enrollment that brought Mary and Joseph to Bethlehem, where Jesus was subsequently born, was instituted by Octavian---who, by that time, was called Augustus---to refill the empty treasury that he had spent on architecture, both in Rome and through the provinces.)  Octavian supposedly murdered Kaisarion (although he could never produce the body) because Kaisarion had the better claim to the Roman imperium; and, of course, Herod attemped to kill Christ, who had, has, and always will have the ultimate throne from which to reign and rule.    By way of historical coincidence, although the Apostle Saint Paul was the first Scriptural writer to call Christ the King Of Kings (in 1 Timothy 6:15), Kaisarion was given that same title (about a century prior to Paul's writings) by his stepfather, Mark Antony.
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georgeschaefer commented on: ONE LESS CHORE by georgeschaefer 2 years 10 weeks ago
But always much too much: But always much too much trash
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crypticbard commented on: ONE LESS CHORE by georgeschaefer 2 years 10 weeks ago
Advice taken. Trash in, trash: Advice taken. Trash in, trash out. Trash out foul odour out.
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crypticbard commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Herod The So-Called Great, Frustrated by J4nu4r14n 2 years 10 weeks ago
The horrors of succession and: The horrors of succession and inheritance. The transgressions are real all thoughout humanity's gory history and it will continue until reality of redemption is invoked for Salvation.
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Herod The So-Called Great, Frustrated by J4nu4r14n 2 years 10 weeks ago
Thank you so much.  This week: Thank you so much.  This week has been very serene, as I look at, and plan for, a sequence of poems in a style that is new to my work, but seems to have been in the making since I first aspired to poetry decades ago.  I think I still have a bit left in me.
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Herod The So-Called Great, Frustrated by J4nu4r14n 2 years 10 weeks ago
I still believe it's amazing: I still believe it's amazing that you recognized a link most people would never have found. Ever. And yes, there is unspeakable solace in trusting in a Higher Power. Blessings. 
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Rebecca commented on: Strife by Bec.J 2 years 10 weeks ago
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem.: Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I am very honoured that you view my writing to a standard worthy of such an Author as Robert Aickman. This poem represents the daily struggles that I am sure a lot of people face as I do myself. We all have inner demons.  All of my writings come from first-hand experience, so once again thank you for taking the time to read them! 
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Starward commented on: Strife by Bec.J 2 years 10 weeks ago
First, this is poem is full: First, this is poem is full of very profound wisdom.  I wanted that statement to be the first part of my comment.  It also creates a very eerie atmosphere.    As I read this, I was reminded of a rather lengthy short story (long but well worth the effort) by Robert Aickman, entitled "Pages From A Young Girl's Journal."  In that story, Aickman---who at the date of its writing was a sixty year old dour Englishman, trained as an architect---imitates the voice of an adolescent girl of the early nineteenth century; who, in "her" journal gives us a vivid account of what it is like to give into the monstrous and demonic presence that pursues her.  I mean this as a compliment to you, because Aickman, in my opinion, is the "gold standard" of eerie tales, and your poem certainly rises to that level, while also provided, as I said above, some very profound wisdom.
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