Luxurious wagons, silken tapestry curtains,
Like the gorgeous gown of a gaudy goddess,
Cinched by soft silver hooks, smooth-edged
And weather-worn like shoreside stones;
The horses' breathwork sweet geyser steam
Together with their calm rhythmic clacking.
You set a sumptuous and
You set a sumptuous and intriguing stage. I would love to see where this goes! Something wonderful is certainly waiting to happen behind those "silken tapestry curtains" amid the "calm rhythmic clacking" in this mysterious place.
Great possibilities!