The River of Your Hair

Perverse & Bazaar
Sun-ripened like the tender skin of a 
sweet pear,
flowing infinitely downward
past and onward still;
a nape of neck, but ever downward,
Her almond tresses spill.
Bare shoulder brushing 
aside the tickle
but still a trickle downward,
ever onward,
never still.
Between her breasts 
where hill meets dale,
most beautiful curtain
creates immaculate veil.  
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Mmmakaveli's picture

Truly Lovely.

I knew from the title that this one would be beautiful.

Bellalibra's picture

serenity of sensuality

addicted to this   On repeat 

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Beatnik1979's picture

Thanks for the read 

Thanks for the read 

S74rw4rd's picture

All the other comments say so

All the other comments say so much that I can only agree with them, I cannot add anything as I stand in the presence of this magnificent poem.

Starward soon to be changed to J-Called

Beatnik1979's picture

I thank you for the value of

I thank you for the value of your insight 

not_an_addict's picture


agree with all my fellow commenters. hopefully one day a man will think of me this way ;) 

please read my poems, and enjoy the real-life drama that is my life!

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hopelessly-candid's picture

This is one of the most

This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever must have been inspired by someone kinda special....with great hair x)

cathycavalcante's picture

Sweet and sensual. Nicely

Sweet and sensual. Nicely crafted, William. Flows long, silky hair... :D


Stardust's picture

poetically sensual... or

poetically sensual... or sensually poetic?? anyway, u get the idea, right??

nicely crafted poem :) liked it

allets's picture


A musical, now a poem :D. Very ticklish and tantalizinly visual. I love extended images that bite! A Georgia On My Mind read - Just Bein' Stella