trapped

No Love Lost

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Temporily Caged

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So this is the first poem that I've ever made public in any way, so yeah, I have no fingernails left, which is probably a tiny bit melodramatic (and disgusting) but whatever.

This poem is about being trapped inside of an image that other people have made for you (in my case, parents) and well as much as I loathe the idea of becoming one of those people that are constantly asking people to comment on their stuff I really would appreciate feedback.

Oh yeah and my punctuation and sentence structure is horrendous but I really couldn't care less. Ciao

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Trapped

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Flightless Bird

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Haikus
Author's Notes/Comments: 

Dedicated to a friend. <3

Any comments, good or bad, are welcome. Please leave a comment and let me know if you liked it, how it made you feel or what you didn't like about it. Thanks for taking the time to read my work. :)

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The Cage

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Hmmm..... Not sure about this one.

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A Rhyming Thingy

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there ya go!

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